The_Sheep

The fan-fic idea is very interesting, since there is only fan-fic with MC's who end up becoming NPC's from Nazarick or a player who was transmigrated along with momonga, but who is also from Nazarick. The idea of ​​a guild going head to head with Momonga's guild is quite interesting.

I hope my rewrite is good enough to deserve all the trust you have in me. Thanks for the review!

Yo, long time no see, ZoneTail. I see you still appreciate the art of Yuri.

You got the point.

Pode escrever em português bro. Eu sou Brasileiro.

Dude, the author just made a joke, don't think about it too much.

The best master of all weapons is Jax.

Both of you are right. As he is now a baby, he has an incredibly fast learning speed, but as he has memories of a language that is completely different from this new world, it can end up making it difficult for him to learn because he will instinctively try to compare it with the language he knows.

That's exactly what happened to me about my ff's ngl

I have to say that after almost a year of writing and getting better at writing, the story I made is good, but it was poorly executed, and it's also full of grammatical errors, now that I'm re-writing it I'm well aware of that.