Review Detail of TheAncientOnell in Vengeance of the Fallen Magus

I soldiered through 58 chapters I thought the author will improve but he just gets worse couldn't take it anymore. The premise is awesome. The book is just unreadable and I had read some mtl but this is on a whole different level of jibba Jabba. Prepare yourself to lose some neurons, imagine having brain freeze without consuming anything icy. Updates are kinda stable mc looks like a simp. Ps after 58 chapters I understood nothing. For the first time I felt like english was extremely foreign to me like am from a different planet this is how this book will make you feel, totally not worth coins. Find yourself a good editor Mr Author Goodluck.