TheAncientOnell
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TheAncientOnell3hCommentésheesh here comes devine plot amor
[Realm]: Divine Bridge Realm, Level Five- TheAncientOnell7hCommenté
this guy sucks 😞 a loner in a cultivation world it's just a typical xianxia relying on plot amor or the system nothing special
Jiang Yuan shook his head slowly: "Senior, I'm sorry!" - TheAncientOnell8hCommenté
isn't he just making enemies unnecessarily can he not be rude to powerful people be Hubble take their stuff shamelessly and do nothing.
Jiang Yuan shook his head, stood up and said, "I have no such intention, please leave!" - TheAncientOnell8hCommenté
are you making him see the future too
[You have acquired a new Innate Luck: Ancient Double Pupils (Gold)] - TheAncientOnell20hCommenté
the dialogue is weird
Why the heck is this story not going according to the novel?! - TheAncientOnell22hCommenté
if you let the story continue like ori ginally sothen your useless why are you even there in the first place
Whole-over, I can't think of any reason why she is helping terrorists. If the story deviates too much from the original, there will be grave consequences, which I have to avoid. And why is that? - TheAncientOnell22hCommenté
slave
[... Mild changes are tolerable. Significant changes aren't allowed.] - TheAncientOnell23hCommenté
this smells like a system slave
[Tasks loading... It will take time.] - TheAncientOnell1dCommenté
crazyness
After a pause, he introduced Zhou Long again: "This is my own older sister, and my younger sister Nana whom I just met." - TheAncientOnell1dCommenté
you seriously need an editor like 😒 very serious the flow is just bad 😔
His unexpected appearance, sitting on the stairs, made Karina start and let out a little scream, but not Edward. The man laughed and stroked her head as usual. Karina is still not used to Lucas' uniqueness. - TheAncientOnell1dCommenté
why?
I have to uphold that image. - TheAncientOnell2dCommentéCh 72 The Small Trick... Part-1.
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what's going on here
He let go of all his disappointment and was not afraid to fight Moran. After all this time, he was so close to his cousin, on good terms. But it ended in betrayal. Lucas is free to attack the enemy. It drags on, even for days. Their fight was fruitless. - TheAncientOnell2dCommentéCh 63 Church of the God of War - Edward's Surprise
- TheAncientOnell2dRépondu à DaoistRqLw6S
- TheAncientOnell3dCommentéCh 71 Nothing more than a Pawn...
- TheAncientOnell4dCommentéCh 15 15. Dazzled
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dude are you Chinese??
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - TheAncientOnell4dCommenté
attractive pet? chiwawa maybe
"I want a defensive-type pet... It should look attractive, and I prefer pets with special abilities. Most importantly, the pet must be unique. I'm ready to pay the full cost at once." Kent stated his conditions and crossed his arms to see how Ria would respond. - TheAncientOnell4dCommenté
Ria,Jia,Lia all this women bimbos
"Ria, I will help this customer. Go to the VIP screen. We have a big customer there." Sony, the senior staff member, instructed Ria, who joined the pet store as a fresher.