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Review Detail of Masterofall1 in A certain God's Chat Group

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Masterofall1
Masterofall1Lv132yrMasterofall1

44 chapters in and there is no sign of the chat group whatsoever, if you're gonna make a god danmachi fic, make a god danmachi fic, but the title clearly promises a chat group, and that's nowhere in sight, you promised that you would introduce it in chapter 25ish around there, but clearly, that was a lie. The characters are bland and one-dimensional, there is clearly and lack of direction in which the novel wants to take, as there is no plot development at all within those 44 chapters. Chapters 30-44ish are about fighting slavers and getting invited by the king 14 chapters, FOURTEEN CHAPTERS FOR TWO MINOR PLOT POINTS!!!!! I'm done trying to hope for the chat group to be introduced to get the actual plot rolling, but instead I'm stuck with bland characters, in a bland drawn-out cliche scenario. So, this is my warning to anyone hoping for another good chat group fic, TURN AWAY.

A certain God's Chat Group

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the first chat group charater got intoduced in chapter 25 and the chat group showed up in chapter 26, did you really read it?