[Reviewed on: 15-06-2021] *Glimpse of initial chapters.* GOOD POINTS: - Likeable MC - Not extremely poverty stricken, MC has some saving and stuff to support himself - Weak to strong trope is executed well - MC can think, he observes and doesn't go round being bullied physically (verbally, yes) - You don't have to cringe because MC is dumb, because he isn't - Expect beasts, Qi cultivation, maybe realms too, and lots of action - Some realistic elements are also depicted because we spot corruption, injustice, torture, bullying, conspiracies too WEAKNESS: - The narration style is highly 'telling' rather than 'showing' - Author's omnipresent tone is everywhere, which gave lesser screen and insights to the character - Readable novel, though there are tense fluctuations - Some information is repeated, such as chapter 2 and 3 has repeated info about Meng Yan.
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COMMEPaper_plane:Mc isn't dumb , rethink on that , when he could choose 2 techniques he only chooses 1 . This genius is beyond my understanding.
BrewingFantasies:Re-read what I wrote up there. [You don't have to cringe because MC is dumb, cuz he isn't.]
Paper_plane:what do you mean?? , You said Mc isn't Dumb , I just proved he is dumb.
dFuZeJoker:You said "mc isn't dumb" without a question mark, which makes it seem like you're agreeing with him
BrewingFantasies:Re-read what I wrote up there. [You don't have to cringe because MC is dumb, cuz he isn't.]
Paper_plane:Mc isn't dumb , rethink on that , when he could choose 2 techniques he only chooses 1 . This genius is beyond my understanding.
Random_Black:I’ve been trying to understand what you people are talking about for 5 min and still can’t can someone summarize?
did we read the same initial chapters because well the mc is as poor as it pretty much gets. Eating muddy buns, dressing like a peasant find out that what he made in 6 years 100 silvers is only worth 1/3 of what he made in 1 month for becoming a disciple. Also going to disagree first real impression if he's a idiot or not he decides to choose a half written technique that no one else was really able to use because of the lack of information when he could of choose 2 techniques that were finished and had people trained in them instead. But no he thought it would dumb to try and comprehend more then 1 technique at a time but yet chooses a technique that isn't even finished that kinda contradicts itself.
_Frost_:did we read the same initial chapters because well the mc is as poor as it pretty much gets. Eating muddy buns, dressing like a peasant find out that what he made in 6 years 100 silvers is only worth 1/3 of what he made in 1 month for becoming a disciple. Also going to disagree first real impression if he's a idiot or not he decides to choose a half written technique that no one else was really able to use because of the lack of information when he could of choose 2 techniques that were finished and had people trained in them instead. But no he thought it would dumb to try and comprehend more then 1 technique at a time but yet chooses a technique that isn't even finished that kinda contradicts itself.
Random_Black:I’ve been trying to understand what you people are talking about for 5 min and still can’t can someone summarize?