first 3 chapters were good can definitely see mc having personality similar to one of your previous novel i will give 5* cuz why not.

THIS is below average gamer novel.. story start with pathetic nerfed untalented mc who even if so many year of reincarnation still genin level after doing missions for several years even with advantage of adult brain and practicing more seriously than other and other advantages of learning and understanding or thinking faster than child or his age... and than his system has all the cliche of gamer... even damage is calculated with 8 hit point on enemy which in real life or even in fantasy life would not make sense.............. and only way he become stronger is constant level by putting life on the line on missions... so nothing new here

can you pls add the Naruto tag as it will give u more traffic. also very good story so far it has an interesting premise, I like how you decided to make the setting sunagakure as I'm bored of constantly reading about konoha.

its good and i havent seen a pupeteer si till now i hope we see him get powerful a little faster tho

This is the kind if gamer style fic I don't like. It's just so messy, kinda reminds me of old rpg where you don't see anything but huge numbers of damages. It also doesn't make sense since damage is calculated based on his system. That's just not how real life works, so it's more like reading an Ad for a game, with ninja characters.

So far this story looks like it's going to be a good one. The MC does not see the Elemental Nations with rose-tinted glasses. He knows all it takes is one mistake and they're dead. I really love that he's a puppet master in the making. Puppet-focused stories are rare in themselves but of those stories, finding one with a good writer is almost a miracle. So thank you for this, and I hope this story goes far.

What happened to the story? Did you delete the chapters? I really enjoyed it... even if you abandon it you could leave those 39 chapters online. It's a nice inspiring read and the puppet main ability thing hasn't been done before. :(

it's fantastic.go slow and steady. slowly grind. let the readers feel that the power MC weilds is earned not granted. anyways. it's awesome so far.

Finaly! Puppet ninjas in Suna is a very interesting theme![img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]