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Ghost_D_writer_
Ghost_D_writer_Lv121yr
2023-10-28 21:34

THIS is below average gamer novel.. story start with pathetic nerfed untalented mc who even if so many year of reincarnation still genin level after doing missions for several years even with advantage of adult brain and practicing more seriously than other and other advantages of learning and understanding or thinking faster than child or his age... and than his system has all the cliche of gamer... even damage is calculated with 8 hit point on enemy which in real life or even in fantasy life would not make sense.............. and only way he become stronger is constant level by putting life on the line on missions... so nothing new here

Sunagakure Shinobi Gamer

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Reimoss
ReimossLv14

That's one thing I hated when reading anything with the gamer system, even the original. The HP. I get that the mc has the gamer's body and can get pierced in the head and not die instantly... but what about the others? They don't have the gamer's body, they are not game characters, why do they have hp?

1yr
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Eggcellent
EggcellentAuthor

Thanks for the criticism. Pinned it so that everyone has a fair overview of what the story will be like. Now, back to why shurikens deal so little damage, well shuriken are not arrows, and deal less damage. You would not die from getting shuriken, but from the bleeding, which I encompassed in this. If you are beheaded, you would die, regardless of gamer or not. Hope I made that clear =)

11mth
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ChangedReviewer
ChangedReviewerLv4

Your review is so dumb and moronic. Total BS

8mth
Ghost_D_writer_
Ghost_D_writer_Lv12

well , I can say the same thing about your reply. I am here sharing what I feel which is the same pupose review section is for. and yet you are coming criticizing me 🤣🤣

ChangedReviewer:Your review is so dumb and moronic. Total BS
7mth
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_Harsh_
_Harsh_Lv14

first 3 chapters were good can definitely see mc having personality similar to one of your previous novel i will give 5* cuz why not.

1yr

Pinky_Gaming
Pinky_GamingLv11

can you pls add the Naruto tag as it will give u more traffic. also very good story so far it has an interesting premise, I like how you decided to make the setting sunagakure as I'm bored of constantly reading about konoha.

1yr
mygrammarsucks
mygrammarsucksLv4

Just make the chapter longer that's the only reason this is not 5 star!

1yr
DaoistBlueAbyss
DaoistBlueAbyssLv4

its good and i havent seen a pupeteer si till now i hope we see him get powerful a little faster tho

1yr
ChangedReviewer
ChangedReviewerLv4

What happened to the story? Did you delete the chapters? I really enjoyed it... even if you abandon it you could leave those 39 chapters online. It's a nice inspiring read and the puppet main ability thing hasn't been done before. :(

8mth
Humbuub
HumbuubLv5

This is the kind if gamer style fic I don't like. It's just so messy, kinda reminds me of old rpg where you don't see anything but huge numbers of damages. It also doesn't make sense since damage is calculated based on his system. That's just not how real life works, so it's more like reading an Ad for a game, with ninja characters.

1yr
paradoxfox999
paradoxfox999Lv4

So far this story looks like it's going to be a good one. The MC does not see the Elemental Nations with rose-tinted glasses. He knows all it takes is one mistake and they're dead. I really love that he's a puppet master in the making. Puppet-focused stories are rare in themselves but of those stories, finding one with a good writer is almost a miracle. So thank you for this, and I hope this story goes far.

1yr
PDanac
PDanacLv4

it's fantastic.go slow and steady. slowly grind. let the readers feel that the power MC weilds is earned not granted. anyways. it's awesome so far.

1yr
Battledroid
BattledroidLv2

Finaly! Puppet ninjas in Suna is a very interesting theme![img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]

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