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Review Detail of uhjuihoijio in King of the east universe

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I think the story definitely has potential. I can see the world and the characters been built. I would just suggest the use of more paragraphs and punctuation to improve the flow of the story. But overall good job. Keep at it :D

King of the east universe

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suggestion noted