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King of the east universe

Auteur: samadetuyi
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Lisez le roman King of the east universe écrit par l'auteur samadetuyi publié sur WebNovel. he is the king of the east universe and he as to protect the east universe with his friends and his father if he fails then the east universe is doomed...

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he is the king of the east universe and he as to protect the east universe with his friends and his father if he fails then the east universe is doomed

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Volume 0 :Auxiliary Volume
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Volume 2 :west universe and the great beast
Volume 3 :south universe and the white knight
Volume 4 :the last war

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Mel_Aniv
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This story has potential by the way. But at least make it more lengthy or don't come short below 800 words. I recommend it to have between 1.5 to 800 words to make the flow of the story to be slower and its pacing will improve. What I do to mine was don't fall on 1000 words. But hey! your story is so awesome! A big wave of readers will come for your novel in the future!

Little_Foxxy
Little_FoxxyLv12Little_Foxxy

Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.

Temmy_Adetuyi
Temmy_AdetuyiLv1Temmy_Adetuyi

I like the book and I also feel connected to the characters the world-building also make me feel like I am there when I read the book I enjoy it

uhjuihoijio
uhjuihoijioLv1uhjuihoijio

I think the story definitely has potential. I can see the world and the characters been built. I would just suggest the use of more paragraphs and punctuation to improve the flow of the story. But overall good job. Keep at it :D

CalypsoDay
CalypsoDayLv1CalypsoDay

The story has a good start. You do have to work a bit more on your writing skills. I would've liked if the chapters were a bit longer, but that's not something to seriously worry about. Some paragraphs don't start with capital letters, and in my opinion, you should correct that. There are also a few grammatical errors, though nothing serious. Pay a bit more attention and your writing will definitely improve. Keep it up!

Wolfgirl1215
Wolfgirl1215Lv2Wolfgirl1215

I think this story has strong world building and a lot of promising description. Its very fun to read, though there are a few grammatical errors, I just wish there were longer chapters!

Limpin_Technocat
Limpin_TechnocatLv3Limpin_Technocat

good going so far, the story is promising. XD seeing a lot of rookie mistakes though, like breaking up the paragraphs properly and grammar, but it doesn't take away from the book. Fix these mistakes and you'll go far

Susan001
Susan001Lv1Susan001

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Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

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