No-Harem?? Thank god Naruto + harem dont go well together Ive read all chapters (chapter 5) and im really enjoying it Keep up the good work

So it's me the author this is my first time writing a fanfic so it might be very rocky as we go but bear with me as we go I myself know I might have some errors here and there but all is good and I'll try my best to get this fanfic going so if you will please give it a try for like 2 to 5 chapters it will be greatly appreciated thank You

My rating is wrong as I stopped reading after the overpowered wises . It's probably good for some but for me I want a character that grows and acquire powers with his/or her own effort than being given ,but that's just my preference .

wq 1 sd 1 cd 3 us 5 wb 2 This novel has very bad grammar and especially its punctuation. You need several moments to understand. The dialogue is very superficial. the jokes are lame and almost nonexistent. I do appreciate if the author doing the job by corrected all the mistake that pointed by the reader. yet... it seems that correcting an author's writing error is a futile attempt.

This fanfic is legendary it only has 9 chapters but the story development is already golden the grammar is not perfect but it can improve, updates are frequent, and there are Ike 2 chapters every other day. I advise you to read until chp 7 before dropping and giving review.

Reviewed as of Chp4(Read on to find out why I couldn't read more) WQ(1/5) - It's unreadable. Misused capitalizations, commas and fullstops. Some paragraphs are far too long. So far I haven't seen any misspellings but misuse of incorrect terms/words. SD(3/5) - Obviously couldn't delve into it much so I'll give it an average score. As much as I could understand, the author did give quite a funny intro. CD(3/5) - Not a fan of the MC's personality but as I've said couldn't delve more so maybe his char will develop more. Thus another average score. US(3/5) - A month since last update so wouldn't keep my hopes up. WB(3/5) - Average score to be a bit more lenient. Conclusion, story might be good but the editing needs so much work to be even barely decent. I don't want to rant too much, the only issue is that this story has such a high rating but it's nonsense, I find it kind of insulting when the grammar and editing of chps need so much work. Language is a medium and if u can't get it halfway right, how are more readers going to enjoy your work? One has to learn how to crawl before they can run. The author might have good ideas but I couldn't read more without getting a headache. This isn't to bash the author, but proper grammar and readability is essential and it's an aspect which is vital for any work to be even decent.

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the dialogue is very clustered give me a headache when reading it. the story is good enough, did make me stop reading when he is given those skill and blood limit. but I do read further and find it to be a fun read, just not for me because of those skill and blood limit. good luck author.