Dave_Guest

What a nice surprise this Book is. In the beginning i thought it World be bothersome with the dhadow Monarch Elements. But the progressive is new different and Unique, and i love the class. This is unbelievably funny to read and Not Depression Like other naruto fanfiction. Please dont drop this author.

I really like it. I loved the books of inheritance cycle. Even if eragons decisions in the books were at some times very annoying it was always fun to read. I hope you can make the story with your alterations even more exciting. And the start is very good.

No rider please. And a human form would be nice. You could make his human reincarnation align with his body at some point. Like the naming. Make his reincarnated soul be marked bound and tronsformed by the dragon mark. That could be the reason for his human form. You could even give him some partial tronsformations at a later time.

Wouldn’t an op progression be more fun? Nazarik in one peace would be just a conquest story and the end of one peace is still open. I would love to read something about an experiment. Let the scientists of one peace come together an create an ultimate lifeform. Giants, fishmen, luarian, sea king, mink, kaido, born destroyers. Just create a monster and let him eat the human humans- Adam fruit. You can let him life as a slave, go on with marine, then pirate or revolutionary. So many possibilities. I would love a story like that

Op as fuck. And don’t forget the comment: only positive aspects will be inherited.

Nice ideas. You can make his stasis into an improvement of his bloodline. Like he didn’t age, and in combination with the hyuga seal an improvement of his bloodline through passive refinement. Like a fortune is disguise.

Thanks for the chapter, but I personally am not that big of a fan of excessive manipulation. And manipulating love twists the mind.

I really like this story. Chapter could be a little longer, but the story development is nice and new. It’s not only about a powerhungry mc and with nice and funny plot twists

In one hand I love the idea, on the other I wanted him to exchange his body with a stronger body. Infinity for example.

To tell the truth I prefer just fire slayer magic. After all he fused all slayer magic into it. Or Origin fire slayer magic. Because everyone in fairytales searches the original magic. After that you can combine the elements into his fire and make different flames with different colors. And even after that you can fuse those elements like the dragon god and infuse them into his fire. And after combining all elements into his fire. That could be the Omni flame or something like that. Just an idea from me