Review Detail of Jagriti_Mandal in Gods of Legendary

I wish I could give negative review but I couldn't,so I gave you 1 star.Your story has no mature content.You have written about how the world is formed,may I ask,how do you know,how the world is formed?.Technically,you have written something wrong,something imaginary. I don't mean that writing imaginary is wrong but writing on a real topic is completely wrong.You have plenty grammar mistakes.Your content is less,mistakes are more.Ha,first correct your english then become an author.