Review Detail of Splendora_Gaming in Death in the Multiverse Re-Write
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Author plug time, lol. Now, previous reviewers either said something blatantly false or highly misleading, so after being depressed about those less then accurate reviews I decided to leave a review of my own and correct the record a bit. First off, a reviewer complained about the horsemen (other then Death, getting too much screen time, so in my previous story I started completely disregarding them, but then I was told that I overdid it by completely disregarding then, and that people wanted to know what they were doing, even if it was just a chapter here and there, so naturally I included a few bonus chapters to appease the audience from their prospective for this re-write. Yes, the beginning part of the story does bounce around between perspectives to explain how each of the four came into the world of Remnant and what they were doing up until they reached Beacon, but at that point on the perspective is almost entirely on the MC, Death. Next point of clarification. One 'review' falsely claimed that the other three horsemen had systems s well and were Death's 'bullies'. This is false. While his 'bullies' did fall into Remnant with him, they did not receive any system like Death did, and thus their souls were completely overwhelmed and suppressed to the point of being basically completely erased by the much more powerful souls of Strife, Fury and War. Only Death, who had a system to protect his mind, safely merged with the Soul of Death without losing his past identity and sense of self. Yes, Death initially started weaker then the other three, due to having merged with Death rather then being completely overwritten, but his system let him gain abilities his siblings could not receive as well as helping him to grow in strength much faster, and to be able to reach an infinitely higher peak potential in the long run. Anyone claiming that his 'bullies' received a system or 'too much screen time' is full of it, because those very bullies had their souls and sense of identities erased and replaced by the souls of the other Nephilim.
Death in the Multiverse Re-Write
Splendora_Gaming
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okay. Yeah, I deleted those two reviews that were up before, which were misleading in places and downright wrong or possibly dishonest in other places. I addressed all their lies and inaccuracies in my review. Hopefully I get no more dishonest haters that seem like they just want to drag me down. By the way, I am caught up with my other story and have one new chapter up, in addition to the new chapters I added in the Remnant arc. The chapter number only looks smaller at the moment due to fewer auxiliary chapters being up.
Project_Horton:Havent see that, alsowhile i have read the original story, im going to wait awhile before i read this one, as there will be new content by then.
Ohhhh. Ok, I'll give it a shot. The reason I haven't read your novel yet is due to these bad reviews, but since you cleared all that up I'll give it a chance.
Splendora_Gaming:okay. Yeah, I deleted those two reviews that were up before, which were misleading in places and downright wrong or possibly dishonest in other places. I addressed all their lies and inaccuracies in my review. Hopefully I get no more dishonest haters that seem like they just want to drag me down. By the way, I am caught up with my other story and have one new chapter up, in addition to the new chapters I added in the Remnant arc. The chapter number only looks smaller at the moment due to fewer auxiliary chapters being up.
I hope you enjoy it. It just gets frustrating when I go as far as doing a ee-write because of things readers complained about and those requested changes get used to m isrepresent things and keep people away based on lies and misrepresentations
Infinite_Shadow_57:Ohhhh. Ok, I'll give it a shot. The reason I haven't read your novel yet is due to these bad reviews, but since you cleared all that up I'll give it a chance.
Splendora_Gaming:I hope you enjoy it. It just gets frustrating when I go as far as doing a ee-write because of things readers complained about and those requested changes get used to m isrepresent things and keep people away based on lies and misrepresentations
well, the RWBY arc is only 39 chapters so it's a bit rushed, but it does move on to other things. Sorry you don't like RWBY, but I rather do like it, at least in the first three seasons. After that the quality dropped a lot, but since my character is fairly OP, he basically saved the world around the time of the end of Volume 3 because that is my favorite volumes (1-3)
Nathanielornsby:I’m just starting this Novel for the first time so hopefully I enjoy it, I love darksiders but I don’t like RWBY
It’s not that I don’t like RWBY, it’s just I don’t Understand it and I’ve Tried getting into multiple times it’s Just something that bores me, though I love the story so far! Please keep up the good work
Splendora_Gaming:well, the RWBY arc is only 39 chapters so it's a bit rushed, but it does move on to other things. Sorry you don't like RWBY, but I rather do like it, at least in the first three seasons. After that the quality dropped a lot, but since my character is fairly OP, he basically saved the world around the time of the end of Volume 3 because that is my favorite volumes (1-3)
That is untrue. He is a young boy who transmigrated and had his body turned into that of Death from Darksiders. Yes, he saves lives plenty, but he is not the 'universal incarnation of death'. Death from Darksiders is not the same as 'Lady Death' from Marvel for example. Heck, in Darksiders 2 'Death' dies at the end in order to resurrect humanity and then cheats Death and is brought back when War breaks the final seal to summon the other three Horsemen. Nothing in Darksiders lore that I know about says that Death cannot try saving people. In fact, while Death sacraficed himself 'for humanity' it wasn't actually truly for Humanity, but rather for his brother 'War' In Darksiders, Death was a bit cold but loved his brothers and sister very much and would have done anything and everything for them, so why wouldn't the boy that inherited his body by allowed to forge bonds with others and want to save and protect them the same way the Death whose body he inherited would have protected the people he cares about?
Kaisen1:hey author is it true that death (him) is saving people from dying when he is literally the universal Incarnation of death as the reviewer said?
valid point, maybe what he meant by the incarnation of death is death from Darksiders. btw did he ever save some evil nature or just a bad person from dying?
Splendora_Gaming:That is untrue. He is a young boy who transmigrated and had his body turned into that of Death from Darksiders. Yes, he saves lives plenty, but he is not the 'universal incarnation of death'. Death from Darksiders is not the same as 'Lady Death' from Marvel for example. Heck, in Darksiders 2 'Death' dies at the end in order to resurrect humanity and then cheats Death and is brought back when War breaks the final seal to summon the other three Horsemen. Nothing in Darksiders lore that I know about says that Death cannot try saving people. In fact, while Death sacraficed himself 'for humanity' it wasn't actually truly for Humanity, but rather for his brother 'War' In Darksiders, Death was a bit cold but loved his brothers and sister very much and would have done anything and everything for them, so why wouldn't the boy that inherited his body by allowed to forge bonds with others and want to save and protect them the same way the Death whose body he inherited would have protected the people he cares about?
He's pretty ruthless to people who've gone completely evil, but will also try to get to future 'evil' people and put them down a better path before they become truly evil, as is the case with Cinder, Neo, Emerald and Mercury. In this story he saved them from their terrible circumstances when they were young and set them on a better path. While he tries to do what he believes is good, he does not blindly accept that people who are evil liter in a story are necessarily fated to get there initially, and so far that faith he has in people to be better with the right encouragement has not completely blown up in his face yet.
Kaisen1:valid point, maybe what he meant by the incarnation of death is death from Darksiders. btw did he ever save some evil nature or just a bad person from dying?
He's actually pretty ruthless to people that are evil in his mind, but will try to divert future evil persons from their intended course if given the opportunity, and guide them towards a good path. For example, he showed no mercy to Adam who, despite War's efforts having succeeded in removing Jacques from the SDC, still hated the Schnee's in general and remained hostile to them to the point of staging an assassination attempt on Weiss and Nicholas.
Kaisen1:valid point, maybe what he meant by the incarnation of death is death from Darksiders. btw did he ever save some evil nature or just a bad person from dying?
Well, the main MC gets the most attention in the adupt period. The three side MC's get a bit more attention early on but reach their peak state on Remnant and stay behind when Death visits other worlds. They eventually will start making minor cameos but they do not have a system like Death does that lets him grow beyond the peak of his species. War, Strife and Fury actually started off as a higher level while Death was a miserable level 1, but that was due to his system which removed his limitations. By the current point in the story Death is approaching level 400 while War, Strife and Fury are stuck at level 300 and can go no higher. Level 300 is also the peak level for Remnant, meaning that the other three Horsemen have already surpassed Ozpin in level and are at the peak where Salem once stood. As defenders of Remnant, they are first class, but the more time passes the more Death and his lovers will surpass them by. At present, only Death has surpassed level 300, but several of his lovers have started reaching quite near to level 300 and do have the power to surpass that limitation for everyone else thanks to their connection to Death, so even if Strife, Fury and War have the highest levels after Death, that wont be true forever
Ototsu_Yume:How are the multiple reincarnated individuals handled? I generally dislike that trope as it takes away focus from the mc and tends to just serve as a plot device to bring trouble to an mc typically so is this that kind of novel?
Splendora_Gaming:okay. Yeah, I deleted those two reviews that were up before, which were misleading in places and downright wrong or possibly dishonest in other places. I addressed all their lies and inaccuracies in my review. Hopefully I get no more dishonest haters that seem like they just want to drag me down. By the way, I am caught up with my other story and have one new chapter up, in addition to the new chapters I added in the Remnant arc. The chapter number only looks smaller at the moment due to fewer auxiliary chapters being up.
Splendora_Gaming:Well, the main MC gets the most attention in the adupt period. The three side MC's get a bit more attention early on but reach their peak state on Remnant and stay behind when Death visits other worlds. They eventually will start making minor cameos but they do not have a system like Death does that lets him grow beyond the peak of his species. War, Strife and Fury actually started off as a higher level while Death was a miserable level 1, but that was due to his system which removed his limitations. By the current point in the story Death is approaching level 400 while War, Strife and Fury are stuck at level 300 and can go no higher. Level 300 is also the peak level for Remnant, meaning that the other three Horsemen have already surpassed Ozpin in level and are at the peak where Salem once stood. As defenders of Remnant, they are first class, but the more time passes the more Death and his lovers will surpass them by. At present, only Death has surpassed level 300, but several of his lovers have started reaching quite near to level 300 and do have the power to surpass that limitation for everyone else thanks to their connection to Death, so even if Strife, Fury and War have the highest levels after Death, that wont be true forever
Cordellswitzer0:when are you going to go back to writing this book. i was enjoying this book and always waiting for more of it and still waiting for more