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Rugh13
Rugh13Lv12yr
2022-07-02 11:34

This story is bad, it is full of plot holes, the MC is bad, he is in love with a 8 year old even though he was 22 before his death and was l**ting after her and thinking of gr**ming her, he also knows the plot of Naruto but a lot of the time he does stupid stuff that makes it look like he doesn't. The english in this fan fic is bad, some times it feels like I'm reading an MTL, though it is bad I still understood most of it, so I didn't take down stars for it or it would have been 1 star. The story is at the level of being boring to enjoy it, but still interesting to keep reading, the interesting part is the shadow ability and what he will do with them, otherwise I wouldn't even get to chapter 15 reading this. Overall, I really wouldn't recommend reading this unless you have nothing else to read, it is fine to pass time if you have nothing else. This is just my opinion, give it a try if you want and you might enjoy this since it seems like some people do enjoy this story. I will drop for now and might continue it later and if I do continue with it, hopefully my next review will make me say that I was wrong and give it more stars.

Naruto World's Shadow lord [COMPLETED]

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61 Chs

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Stone_Forge98
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