The story is not bad once you understand what the author wrote. Other than that, the plot is similar to any other naruto fanfic..............

i found this novel today and mann is it good. Most naruto san books give the mc the sharingan a system with blood lines but here all he gets is knolwedge from his past and he has to work from the ground up and its great

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A Very good naruto fanfiction. Plot premise and plot progression are very good. Mc's characterization is excellent. Fanfic is completed which is always a plus. There are two main problems with this fanfic. They are : Character interactions & grammar Character interactions are average. Grammar is below average.

The concept is great. That said there are a lot of situations that make me question my sanity for reading as far as I have. In general expect canon from the story, a four man genin team and grammar that will seriously cause you to want to give up on the story regardless of what happens. All in all, the concept is great but needs to be revisited by the author or someone that will execute it better.

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well as of chapter 7 the grammar was pretty bad and horrible I had to focus on each and every line and decode whatever the fuc* the author was trying to say. other than that if you can understand what he was saying then it was pretty average fic.