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Review Detail of Monsoon_Mangoes in THE FANTASY LAND

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The plot line seems promising, but there are few things to fix, like punctuations and spacing. The story has the potential to reach more and more readers. Keep up with the good work author.

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Thank you Mam!Stay tuned for the updates😊!