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Madara1996
Madara1996Lv44yr
2020-07-10 14:19

This is a good story. I hope that author will continue this story to the end and not drop it half a way. Character developments are good and world setting is good. I hope Ken's mother will be back to see him.

Return of the Otsutsuki (ATG)

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3.9
26 Chs

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Hasu_Yodd
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Too forcefull Too much bullsh't Bad reviews are deleted

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Palladian
PalladianLv14

Great ATG fanfic with no bullsh*t, I rate it 5 star, hope author will not drop it...........................................................

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Just_ForFun
Just_ForFunLv5

Thank you for you're time and efforts..

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Salamin
SalaminLv5

Reveal spoiler

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GreedAF
GreedAFLv4

It's a good fanfiction, i like how MC isn't a beta good for nothing and doesn't have problem with manipulating people(even as basic as it was with the mother and daughter dou) and that he thinks and not just brute force everything, though in a cultivation world it's a necessity for brute forcing once in a while the only problem is I WANT MORE CHAPTER, *Cough* ahem, that's all. Thanks for your hard work.

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Shink_a
Shink_aLv13

Writing a full review review would just be a waste of time, just know that this fanfic is **** and if every chapter doesn't make you cringe then you should check your taste in novels

4yr
TheViciousVillain
TheViciousVillainLv2

I'll evaluate it with one word.. "A waste" Well.. that was two words actually but who cares? Review: - that was kinda a good idea but the story development......agh Am not blaming the author or something I know that everybody has deferent thoughts But in my opinion this book is not worth reading why? There is a lot of plot holes Romance or idk what started waaayyy to early(hell the mc is still a kid??)and that ruined the plot(at least for me) ⚠️:I didn't read all the novel but that was what I understood from the chapters I read.... Final evaluation:2.0

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