Great story for the people who love games and anime. I noticed few grammar problum at the start but later there were fewer and fewer as i progressed. If you still have grammer problum use grammely will fix lot of grammer problum. The first chapter is key to get people hooked so i think you should use grammerly and fix the little grammer problum. Overall => Its a great story and must read for anime and video games fans.
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