Review Detail of Jericho_Uy in My Vampire System

I don't know man. This is the #2 book for power stones and I just can't seem to enjoy it. It's the same generic type of stuff that SAO started a long time ago. It stays updated pretty well, so that's good. Since this is a popular and highly rated book I put more scrutiny in judging its grammar and it just isn't good in that department. Characters are mid, and I can kinda imagine the world though it doesn't pop out at me.