Review Detail of shakez in Supreme Magus
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I wish I could rate higher, but there are grammatical errors that distract from the story as well as contradictory world building. The author states that women have stronger magic generally than men then 5 out of 6 teachers are men and 60 to 70% of the students he mentions are men as well as all of the archmages are men. There are a couple other issues, but those really stuck out to me. This story could use a good edit.
Supreme Magus
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All the way back in chapter 22 it is said that women have a higher apt towards magic, think that's what he is referring to.
Treskersic:I dont really get what errors are you talking about, i have read till the latest chp. And the author didnt state women being stronger or anything. Are you trolling ? seriously man.
I see what you're saying, but then again, men are also said to be more physically apt than women, yet there are quite a few women in the story who are on par if not superior. I honestly don't think that it matters that much, as the female protagonists are typically stronger than the male counterparts as it continues. I think it's more of a random point brought up that just fades into the background tbh
