Review Detail of NowGoWithTheFlow in The War That Transcends Timelines!

Item: The War That Transcends Timelines!
Rating: 3

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NowGoWithTheFlowLv141yrNowGoWithTheFlow

I tried to read this novel but I just seam to quit. Like really this is my second time trying to read this novel I just can't get into it. Also it feels author SPOILER ALERT: Makes MC get capture to make plot which doesn't make sense to me. Chapters are also to short. Also feels a little rushed.

The War That Transcends Timelines!

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Chaos_OverseerAuteurChaos_Overseer

you are correct, on these points, it was my first novel, a rewrite/new story is in progress using my experiences from this book, slower pace less forced plot. I thank you for trying to read it ❤

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