NowGoWithTheFlow

Read chapter 1 an 2 then skip to chapter 18. Everything else between is MC moaning about he the MC is human an will always be weak compared to sayins. Slow plot though a new take on the original story, expanding minor character backgrounds. Also more on the superpower school. A ok read to pass the time.

After chapter 25 it's getting worse. More than half of each chapter is ryeming an poems that add nothing to story. While the other half gives you vague explanation of what's happening. Please author fix this.

Great novel. Chapter 25 an 26 was a let down though. The rest was intriguing to read. I didn't like those poem you put in each chapter. The chapters are long enough, great grammar while the story is so much different than the original while still keeping tanya personality.

Looks like I will stop reading this since you nerf MC system for no reason. Before that book was great. Long chapters, grammar was ok, the story was slow but intriguing.

Don't expect much from this novel. I looked at other books author made an looked like only a few chapters before being dropped. I hate the gacha an also this is to rushed. Don't read is my recommendation.

One thing I hate happening is when a system messes with the MC in a bad way. Why the heck you call this the one piece world it's not. It may resemble one piece but it's not. Also I read isekai because I like mc changing the story themselves but this no it's just sh*t story. The MC is in a already changed an different one piece world that doesn't make sense.

This book was written in a way that the author only understood. First couple chapters I know you summon goku, but which goku is what I wanna know. Like was goku a child, what's his power level or what arc did you summon goku from. Also since your in dragonball universe an summoned goku, will there be 2 goku or did you just summon goku from the same universe? An really I just don't like you summoning characters from same universe it makes everything complicated.

Don't read this. It is a tease. Just when you think there might be sex it stops. Many blueball scenes an then continue the story then repeat to being blueballed. Plot is super slow MC is beta an won't take action.

A ok read to pass the time. It's readable an grammar is ok. That's all though, the MC is dumb while not trying to change the story an just following the main cast. MC is justify by saying to make them stronger which MC is failing hard on. The whole premise is to change plot ending of MHA, doesn't mean you have to make main cast stronger. There are so many ways to make the ending different but MC does the dumbest way. For reference make the MC the strongest an the ending would naturally change.

Have you the author ever read or seen naruto. Your MC has a army but MC acts dumb an retarded say it won't do anything over an over. You have a spaceship you could literally bombard the planet whenever you want or just throw big rocks down from space. 5 chapters get you nowhere it just repeats itself with different wording, which is basically word count. At least if you write a fanfic of naruto at least watch it or research it.