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Zeno23dCommentéafrodita!
Can anyone guess who this goddess Hemera speaks of is? Honestly, it's not too hard to guess. Hope you enjoyed it. :D- Zeno24dCommenté
unless that part is changed
The three Boa sisters weren't the star items of the upcoming auction. The auction house likely kept some extremely valuable items as surprises. Kahn wanted to see if the Paramecia Love-Love Fruit, which Hancock ate in the original story, would appear in this auction. If it did, he planned to take it. - Zeno24dCommenté
No, it is clearly shown that Hancock's fruit was given by a celestial dragon already in Mariejois,
The three Boa sisters weren't the star items of the upcoming auction. The auction house likely kept some extremely valuable items as surprises. Kahn wanted to see if the Paramecia Love-Love Fruit, which Hancock ate in the original story, would appear in this auction. If it did, he planned to take it. - Zeno24dCommenté
30 too many, maximum of 20 years, is more acceptable, in that time it is enough for Hankok to fall in love with the MC and the deal is as if it never happened in itself
"After thirty years, I will give you back your freedom. If you still want to return to Amazon, Lily, I will take you back." - Zeno24dCommenté
one more is missing, I would recommend editing these parts and putting an oc, since the position of admiral should never be empty, and on top of that it is illogical that there is no candidate for admiral
At this time, the Admirals were still Sengoku and Zephyr. - Zeno24dCommentéCh 4 The Strongest Supernova In History
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????, roger????, edit!!, the rocks information was deleted!
With the death of Rocks D. Xebec, Shiki's withdrawal from the world's strongest stage, and the arrest of Patrick Redfield, Whitebeard is already the king of the sea in this era of great pirates. - Zeno24dCommenté
edit, mc is 15 and robin is 11
"Combining the two, that kid named Cross Kahn, even if he's only ten years old, can lift objects of astonishing weight with telekinetic power." - Zeno24dRépondu à GregariousLion
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"Unfortunately, at that time, both our Marines and the CP organization were focused on the 'Rocks Pirates.'" - Zeno24dCommenté
M 15
She was picked up by Kahn two years ago and is now his personal maid. At the age of eight, she was offered a reward of 79 million berries - "Devil Child" Nico Robin. - Zeno24dCommenté
Hello, there is a Chinese one piece fanfiction just like this one, are you translating it or are you just taking the main idea of the MC's monstrous talent, and are you going to make the corresponding changes to make it your own story?, since that fanfiction is outdated compared to to the knowledge we have today and it would not make much sense to translate it.
Ch 1 West Blue Overlord - Zeno24dCommenté
It's wrong, it's good that it's the North Sea, but they shouldn't know the categories of the zoan, at most they should say that it is a rare flying type zoan.
"Cross Kahn, it is rumoured that he could stand when he was born, lift an adult with one hand before he was one year old, destroy a house with one punch at the age of five, and has invulnerable skin. He took over the family at six and ate a Zoan, dragon fruit, phantom beast, and dragon form at ten. How do we deal with him?" - Zeno24dCommenté
another admiral is missing, you can put an "oc", the 3 admiral positions must always be full. edit
In this era, Admirals are still Zephyr and Sengoku. - Zeno24dCommenté
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In addition, Kahn had the strength of Kaido, able to throw a nanny at zero years old. - Zeno25dCommenté
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The events that followed were the same as those shown in the anime. - Zeno25dCommenté
Why does he call them ncp if he knows they are real now?
With his crimson eyes surveying the assembled NPCs, Aurelius sensed their anticipation, despite their lowered heads. - Zeno25dCommenté
The chapter seems chunnibi, it is almost the same as the original novel, disappointing, a thousand times better it would have been if his creation Lumi defeated them, being an original fight, in the blink of an eye the entire army annihilated, and only the leaders alive for experiments.
Ch 14 Chapter 14: Nigun's Despair - Zeno25dCommenté
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Everything unfolded much like it did in the anime, with the battle starting with the emotional scene of Gazef's soldiers ready to sacrifice their lives for Gazef. - Zeno25dCommenté
The Lucifer part is unnecessary, in addition, giving your full name in the future could be disadvantageous, since currently the MC would be a god in that world, but if in the future he goes to outer space to explore the planet, we don't know what he will find, There may be magical civilizations that have name assassin magic, death note type, etc.
"No need for that. I've made a commitment to protect this village, and I intend to see it through to the end. After all, nothing can harm what's under my protection—under Aurelius Nova Lucifer's protection."