Writing is a lot like cooking: sometimes you're a gourmet chef, sometimes you're Gordon Ramsay with a hangover. But hey, even a burned cookie can be delicious if you sprinkle enough sugar on it. 🍪
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This is my second review as the author and I got some spoilers for u 🥴not that much just a little 🤏 Let’s talk about the character .yes his gonna be overpowered 😮💨 .Yes his gonna be a mutant .Yes his gonna have a system .Yes his system doesn’t have any form of consciousness,it’s just a catalyst .yes he is a transmigrator .yes he gets memories of the body .yes he is rich .yes he is very good looking{he is like GOJO with white eyes .yes he is brutal .yes he is not mentally stable .yes he is not a psychopath .yes he will have a tragic death .yes he is male .yes he is transmigrated to 1945 .yes he goes to school with Charles Xavier .yes he can take abilities .yes he can upgrade abilities .yes he is intelligent .yes ,yes ,yes he is all the good things mixed in one lol Although this review might make you think that the character is too forced or too perfect, Nope u wrong , DONT believe me 🥴read the first two chapters lol
lol I would love that 🤣but this story is not a copy of the unlimited card story , it’s just inspired by it , it is a totally different story that has a totally different concept, peggi is old in this story around Steve’s age while the MC is only 10 years old so I don’t see how that relationship will work 🤣, anyway I do plan to give him a love interest but it’s someone u would never expect , lol I’m sorry if this storie didn’t meet what u where looking for , but I can only promise you one thing , this story has potential
This is the dog senses he god from his dog titan , and for anyone wondering where titan is , he left with killians mother I guess it would just mean that titan is not killian dog but he is merrys dog
🤣it’s 1945 and no , it started as a mistake but when I saw it , it made me laugh so I left it in there 🥴
🤣no bro what u talking about lol , but it’s cool lol , just read it’s gonna get better
It’s just plot 😂 I’m joking , lol DONT forget that the main character has a consciousness of his own , and thoughts do trigger whether it’s u pooping in the bathroom or taking a shower 😂 And bro I never said she abandoned him ,🤣 I just said she ain’t coming back , this is not rocket science there is a reason for all things
U will see in the few chapters to come