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Not that bad, the writing is doesn’t flow as smooth as some other novel, but that what happen if you not a experienced author, or has a editor. but is decent enough, hence the 4 stars.

The first couple of chapter seem interesting so far. so keep up the good work

Not bad, doesn’t seem like the best but is pretty decent if you compare to other novel.

Seem very interesting so far, keep up the good work.

Haven’t read that far yet, but is seem interesting so far

This novel seem interesting so far, decent world people and characters.

Very interesting story and world building

Very interesting story and world building

Very interesting story and world building

Very interesting story and world building