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The_Weeaboo_Lux1dRépondu à PartyCannonPiratethats a good point thx
With the threat neutralized, Yuuma continued his journey, more cautious than ever. He knew that Greed Island was filled with players who would stop at nothing to gain an advantage. But he was determined to succeed, no matter the obstacles.- The_Weeaboo_Lux1dRépondu à PartyCannonPirate
It was said that he did many sports, and he was always number one in all of them. so Interrupted that knew martial arts like boxing, Judo, karate ect..........
Nicolas used a variety of martial arts styles, blending them seamlessly into his attacks. He employed swift, precise strikes from Wing Chun, powerful kicks from Taekwondo, and fluid grapples from Jiu-Jitsu. Each move was executed with precision and purpose, overwhelming Pokkle's defenses. - The_Weeaboo_Lux4dRépondu à NiceReviewer
Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts. I understand your concern about the characters not having enough interactions before this point. I will review the story and consider adding scenes that develop their relationship more gradually and naturally. Your input is valuable in helping me create a more cohesive and engaging narrative. Thanks again for pointing this out!
Killua sighed in relief. "I'm sorry, Nicholas. I couldn't let him hurt you." - The_Weeaboo_Lux4dRépondu à NiceReviewer
just trying to be as accurate as possible.
With a sigh of relief, I said, "Mine isn't #99 or #405 either." - The_Weeaboo_Lux4dCommentéCh 27 Compute
- The_Weeaboo_Lux4dRépondu à Atsuuki
Black
Skin Color: Dark - The_Weeaboo_Lux5dRépondu à PunchingDrywallMan
I was thinking the same thing
Comments: - The_Weeaboo_Lux5dRépondu à PunchingDrywallMan
thx that helps
Comments: - The_Weeaboo_Lux5dRépondu à NiceReviewer
thx for the heads up
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- The_Weeaboo_Lux10dRépondu à Grammy
thx I will fix it.
"Yeah, but before we do that, let's get some new clothes." - The_Weeaboo_Lux10dCommentéSeeing this, I decided to end him with a move I'd been saving due to it causing me to lose orbs as a condition to activate it. This technique was called "Orbital Cannon." I gathered 15 out of 50 orbs to my index finger, and all 15 orbs contracted and condensed into one orb. I waited until he was in range to fire. He soon entered range, and I released my energy, hitting him straight on like a cannon, engulfing him in a blue light of energy.
- The_Weeaboo_Lux10dRépondu à Blow_Mind
no,pe
Killua, Nicholas, and I were talking about our favorite games as Nicholas allowed Killua to play on his laptop, playing an RPG called Forever Knights. During this time, we shared laughs and smiles. - The_Weeaboo_Lux11dRépondu à Pedro_Games4
lol
"How could you?" I said, pulling back my hair from my face. - The_Weeaboo_Lux11dRépondu à Mikey_3214
yes
"Thank you, boss. I won't let you down," Nicholas replied enthusiastically.