HorrorDiligent69

I have an intense feeling that Xu Yan's parents or family have absolutely NO idea that he not only took these extremely valuable things, but gave them to someone with less experience and abilities that himself, and obviously that's saying more than alot 😅.

Of all things that claim to be amazing, this story has more of a right to that title then most of all those things.

Ohhh boiii do I lovee thisss...you paint the perfect picture with your words alone, and not only am I able to feel as if I can see everything that you explain, but the way you've been able to capture certain feelings and them launch them out to us readers...10 out of 10.

I absolutely love the raw emotion that you are able to emulate, your flawless ability to not only capture my attention, but to keep it hanging on your every last sentence that is written is undoubtedly remarkable. Thank you so much for allowing not only me, but so many others to be able to delve slightly into the emense imagination that you obtain.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Ok gona check one of those out right now..thanxx

Man I sure can relate to this MC, like seriously everything that was mentioned about him concerning how he's just different to it actually working out for the better because yu don't get stabbed in the back...good stuff..there's to many things I like about this story alreadyy.

I also like zias way of thinking 👍

So regardless of your spelling and grammar issues that you already mentioned would happen, I have to say that all in all I can tell that you indeed have a great imagination, and to me, when it comes to writing and reading, imagination is everything. I love to be fully immersed, and you have accomplished that already. very niice.

Ketsueki..you're holding out on us..where are you hiding your personal harem of futas ? at this point I absolutely believe that your stories come from the completely REAL events that have occurred when you have shared your harem with your friends and maybe one or two stories of yourself...😅 now the only other question is if they are in this world ? or the world you originally came from..ok srry one more thing lol eaither way you HAVE to take me to your other world..at least just one time..pleaseee 😂😉 lol