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King91OMa month agoCommentéCharacter designs are here!
- King91OMa month agoRépondu à Matheus_3355
Thanks. Hope you like it :)
- King91OM5 months agoRépondu à Lone_Wolf747
It is 4th wall as the MC is somehow aware of people peeking in on his life. Hence it is called 4th wall. Not familiar with 4th base, baseball perhaps?
Ce paragraphe a été supprimé. - King91OM6 months agoRépondu à Joker333
Thanks for reading 🙏🏻😁
- King91OM7 months agoRépondu à MAXandMILLS
Thank you. I just write as a hobby so I am not a certified author hence my writing quality will not be as good. It's my first time writing a novel too. Book 1 will not have any world ending as it's a re-telling from the MC's perspective. Book 2 is where chaos begins.
- King91OM7 months agoPosté
Very engaging and intriguing start. I don't know why this gave me a little Ben10 vibe. MC have to discover his abilities after gaining his suit which gave me Crysis vibe as well. Awaiting for more chapters for further development!
- King91OM7 months agoCommenté
I think here is a typo? Supposed to be "where" is it?
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