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Great chapter Going back to another one of my usual unsolicited criticisms: The battle between Annihilus and the lion enemy seemed a bit boring, as they are two recent characters that I as a reader don't give a damn about, I believe it would have been more fruitful if they used this short confrontation before the arrival of Eidolon to give some great feats of power to Annihilus - to configure him as a powerful enemy through real demonstrations, basically. But it's much easier for me to criticize and advise by reading the whole thing already done than for you to do it for zero, of course, you're a great writer.

You're in the webnovel, dude, 50% of the readers of this site read AI novel and give them 5 stars.

Great chapter. The other story was good, It was a shame she was erased, But this one is really much more unique from the beginning.

Excellent chapter A little correction, author-San: Ijichi refers to Maki as maki-kun throughout the chapter, however, the suffix "Kun" is something used exclusively for the male gender in Japanese. When referring to a younger girl, "chan" is usually used, and "San" is used if it is someone with whom you are more respectful or unfamiliar. Since Ijichi is an employee, I believe that "Maki-san" It would be the right.

The development with Rise was really interesting, I imagined that this fanfic was different

Welcome back, it was an impressive new first chapter.

An innocent question, is this AI writing?

Dude, if you thought that was good, I'm afraid of what turned out bad. It's not that I'm spamming bad things, it's that how badly done the first ones 15 chapters are made(it was the most I read), That I was very unhappy.

Dude, this whole answer is IA Without any refinement of the human mind.

Dude, this is a writing made by AI, without any soul or intention, that's why it repeats everything. Are you sure you're going to give this note? I can recommend you a dozen really well-written stories that didn't get that grade.