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Primordial_Devour

Primordial_Devour

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If your paths intertwined with mine be prepared to meet your end as I am the embodiment of death and known through all realms as the primordial devourer - kind of catchy don’t you think?

2023-11-05 JointGlobal
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    Primordial_Devour3mth
    Répondu à PXIG

    👍

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    Primordial_Devour3mth
    Répondu à Lucien121

    I’m too busy with school and work so when I have a lot of free time, I’ll probably come back.

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    Primordial_Devour4mth
    Répondu à Yajin3004

    You’ll understand later.

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    Primordial_Devour5mth
    Répondu à dylan_pyle

    This is my first novel, even I wasn’t expecting it to be perfect when starting out.

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    Primordial_Devour5mth
    Répondu à Monarch_Lord

    I am down to negotiate. Just tell me what part of the chapter you were unsatisfied with.

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    Primordial_Devour5mth
    Répondu à Monarch_Lord

    I added that in there just to make drama.

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    Primordial_Devour5mth
    Répondu à

    bro read a little further, I explained why. And if you think about the reasoning does make a little sense.

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    Primordial_Devour5mth
    Répondu à Monarch_Lord

    Lol

    <Hey! Get away from me! getaway now! Aughhh!> The screams of the announcer echoed in everyone's head, no longer making them hesitate. 
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    Primordial_Devour5mth
    Répondu à Monarch_Lord

    Don’t worry, the concept would be the same but I will try to improve on the grammar.

    Guys, I know there are several mistakes that I made during my time as a new author. So, I plan on recreating this novel because any change I make, might or might not affect the story but don't worry I plan to do so when I finish the first volume.
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    Primordial_Devour6mth
    Répondu à Daoist_Culture

    no harem but romance.

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    Primordial_Devour6mth
    Répondu à Skyfail

    Liam didn't hate the man because of his love for his son, he disdained him for his weakness, letting his life being pushed around by others.

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    Primordial_Devour6mth
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    [Image]
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    Primordial_Devour6mth
    Répondu à Romance_guy

    Forshadowing?? 🤫

    Their eyes were like the ones of a dead fish, lifeless and dark, completely given up on life.
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    Primordial_Devour6mth
    Répondu à Romance_guy

    No, it would be shown in the next chap.

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    Primordial_Devour6mth
    Répondu à DMadLord

    Ok but Bro how do I improve my grammer😭😭

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    Primordial_Devour6mth
    Répondu à DMadLord

    Hi I am a new author, and I have been a inspired by this piece of art, I hope you don’t mind me taking some of the elements of your beautiful work. My grammar is really bad tho. I hope you let me know how to improve my grammer i you don’t mind.

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    Primordial_Devour6mth
    Répondu à Supreme_IQ

    Lol I don’t mind at all, and thanks for your opinion.

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    Primordial_Devour6mth
    Répondu à Supremeking92

    Thank you for the review, I will try my best to improve the writing quality.

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    Primordial_Devour7mth
    Répondu à Romance_guy

    I can add it but later in the story

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    Primordial_Devour7mth
    Répondu à BlueIndo

    It would probably be around between chapter 25-30

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