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SalveYing

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  • SalveYing
    SalveYing1d
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    Who is Tony and which fanfic does he belong to?

    Ch 125 Third heartbeat
    Seimeigakure: The Hidden Village of Life
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Cadenadeaventuras
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  • SalveYing
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    Répondu à Bob_Uchiha_XD

    1. I think you're right. Readers tend to see themselves reflected in the protagonists, so if they are ridiculed, betrayed, or suffer other negative actions, the readers will show their displeasure like the monkeys they are. 2. You also have a point that the author was not sincere about the NTR part, or maybe he didn’t consider it as such. Still, I didn’t understand the “cm” part. 3. What?

    A life with the Author
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • SalveYing
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    TFTC

    Ch 91 Omake
    More than a Dragon Warrior
    Films · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • SalveYing
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    Répondu à Azathoth2

    Not at the moment, but in the future... maybe? It has that feeling of an author who creates harems.

    Ch 25 MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM
    Fanfic Treasures: A Reader's Guide
    Anime et bandes dessinées · SalveYing
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  • SalveYing
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    Review of the First 50 Chapters (that nobody asked for, but I'm going to write it anyway and will change if necessary) I liked it. I like the protagonist, I like the author mentioned in the fanfic, although sometimes he comes off a bit silly, but not annoyingly so. I like the system he has, the combination of animes/mangas/manhwas he used to create the world and their interactions. Now, the controversial part: yes, there is NTR. I'm not going to lie, did it serve for character development? I think so. The character he used was quite disposable, Tsukimi Chifuyu from Seiso Kanojo Ochiru. It's a doujin and I'm sure everyone recognizes it, you filthy degenerates, don't fool yourselves. At some point, I wondered why he didn't stop her from going with the blonde guy. I've read some fanfics where they save her, where they prevent her from going with the blonde guy, and with this story, I realized something: it wouldn't serve any purpose. He watches over her and prevents them from going further, but he doesn't stop her, because what's the point of being with someone with so little conviction that decides to cheat on you over a photo of a kiss? Sooner or later, she would have cheated on you because that's who she is, and it's not the protagonist's fault; he's a normal person dating a girl who seemed to have good feelings but turned out she didn't. I think all those one-star negative reviews that just say "NTR, NTR, NTR" really affect the fanfic. I had known about this fanfic for a while, but those comments put me off immediately and only now did I give it a chance. The chapters where he confronts her are quite loaded with tension and emotion. I think he did well, and I would recommend giving it a chance.

    A life with the Author
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Emmanuel_Capricorn
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  • SalveYing
    SalveYing5d
    Répondu à Heavy_Space

    Thank you for the recommendations! I truly appreciate them.

    Ch 14 Re:life with Karmic Gacha - Modern Family
    Fanfic Treasures: A Reader's Guide
    Anime et bandes dessinées · SalveYing
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  • SalveYing
    SalveYing6d
    Répondu à MISTYSLAYER45

    Your understanding of my comment makes me feel bad. Can't you insult me a little?

    MHA:-Glitch In Reality
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Numix
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  • SalveYing
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    Répondu à Darkness_1

    I'm not sure how to respond to that. The title is there and the link I copied and pasted works for me.

    Optimistic Game: Revised - RWBY
    Fanfic Treasures: A Reader's Guide
    Anime et bandes dessinées · SalveYing
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  • SalveYing
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    Ch 57 I'm Alive!!!
    Daily Drama (In American TV Shows)
    TV · Maximus_Quill
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  • SalveYing
    SalveYing12d
    Répondu à Magasu_senpai

    There is a minimal amount of romantic tension with Nami, but there are no established couples. This fanfic primarily focuses on the adventure.

    Ch 6 This Bites! - One Piece
    Fanfic Treasures: A Reader's Guide
    Anime et bandes dessinées · SalveYing
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  • SalveYing
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    Répondu à Azathoth2

    It hasn't become a harem yet, but I bet it will. Even so, the strong point of the story is the adventure. I haven't seen any romance in at least the last 40 chapters.

    Ch 9 Streamer in the Omniverse
    Fanfic Treasures: A Reader's Guide
    Anime et bandes dessinées · SalveYing
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  • SalveYing
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    Répondu à Azathoth2

    Yep

    Ch 3 The Spider
    Fanfic Treasures: A Reader's Guide
    Anime et bandes dessinées · SalveYing
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  • SalveYing
    SalveYing16d
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    I read more than half of the chapters and here is my review. It's good; I like the premise and that the character is not a fool. I like the first world they explore; it has good grammar and feels fluid. Now, the bad, according to me: I don't like that the system has so much dialogue. During a fight, half of it was dialogue from the system saying that its abilities were improving, and I found it somewhat annoying. Even so, I recommend it.

    Trials of the Multiverse
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Slayer_King_One
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  • SalveYing
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    This fanfic is very good. Although the updates are irregular, it is entertaining. I hope you continue with the work, as I would like to see more chapters.

    New life as Naruto Uzumaki
    Anime et bandes dessinées · NahinS77
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  • SalveYing
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    I have to say I was surprised. This has never happened to me before: I read one chapter and I don't want to read this horrendous thing again. It's terribly written and I don't recommend it.

    FOOTBALL MANAGER SYSTEM
    Anime et bandes dessinées · Legend_Man_1262
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  • SalveYing
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    Here is my review of the first 80 chapters. I have to say it's good; the chapters are short, but there are many, so it balances out. The story is not bad, it's slow but entertaining. I suppose it's a translation, but so far I don't have that unpleasant feeling of reading an MTL. I hope you continue with the work. Good luck and best regards.

    Red Nara
    Anime et bandes dessinées · l_legolas
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  • SalveYing
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    Thieving rat, this is an already finished fanfic called A Curse of Truth. At least have the decency to give proper credit to the author and not just change the title. You're only missing opening a Patreon. I recommend the fic, it's quite good

    HP: I got Transmigrated into the World of Magic
    Livres et littérature · Kitamari
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  • SalveYing
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    Sometimes we don't appreciate translations. I liked the fanfic and went to look for it in MTL. Obviously, I found it, but it's horrible to read words like "Huiye Xiutai", "Shui Wuyue", "maeltrons". It's terrible and it made me lose the desire to keep reading. I look forward to continuing reading your translation. 11/10.

    Naruto: The rise of Uzumaki Kingdom
    Anime et bandes dessinées · electronatom
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  • SalveYing
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    I finished reading the first 21 chapters and I have to say that I prefer this Lockhart who travels between the worlds of Marvel and Harry Potter, rather than merging them. Keep up with the story, 10/10!

    Marvel's Hogwarts Professor
    Films · GarudaTranslation
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  • SalveYing
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    I wanted to read it, but I couldn't finish chapter 2. All that unnecessary information just to say that he has Lucifer's lineage, is overpowered, can talk to animals, and is going to form a harem with Hermione and the others. It's hard to read.

    Harry Potter: I Have A mastery System
    Films · sabina_ali
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