Review Detail of SalveYing in A life with the Author
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Review of the First 50 Chapters (that nobody asked for, but I'm going to write it anyway and will change if necessary) I liked it. I like the protagonist, I like the author mentioned in the fanfic, although sometimes he comes off a bit silly, but not annoyingly so. I like the system he has, the combination of animes/mangas/manhwas he used to create the world and their interactions. Now, the controversial part: yes, there is NTR. I'm not going to lie, did it serve for character development? I think so. The character he used was quite disposable, Tsukimi Chifuyu from Seiso Kanojo Ochiru. It's a doujin and I'm sure everyone recognizes it, you filthy degenerates, don't fool yourselves. At some point, I wondered why he didn't stop her from going with the blonde guy. I've read some fanfics where they save her, where they prevent her from going with the blonde guy, and with this story, I realized something: it wouldn't serve any purpose. He watches over her and prevents them from going further, but he doesn't stop her, because what's the point of being with someone with so little conviction that decides to cheat on you over a photo of a kiss? Sooner or later, she would have cheated on you because that's who she is, and it's not the protagonist's fault; he's a normal person dating a girl who seemed to have good feelings but turned out she didn't. I think all those one-star negative reviews that just say "NTR, NTR, NTR" really affect the fanfic. I had known about this fanfic for a while, but those comments put me off immediately and only now did I give it a chance. The chapters where he confronts her are quite loaded with tension and emotion. I think he did well, and I would recommend giving it a chance.
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On the topic of the girlfriend's infidelity, there are three factors that harm the fanfic: 1.- Readers of fanfics and web novels imagine that they are the protagonists. So if the author makes the protagonist ridiculed, tortured, betrayed and other negative actions, readers will be dissatisfied if there is no very good reason and GAIN; but above all they will never tolerate harm being done to them (the protagonist) having the information to avoid it. 2.- The author was not emphatic, sincere and timely when telling the public that there is infidelity, that the protagonist's girlfriend will cheat on him with another man who has 15 cm of manhood, that is, 13 cm more than the protagonist. 3.- Fanfic readers are not mature enough to understand that all women without exception are promiscuous.
1. I think you're right. Readers tend to see themselves reflected in the protagonists, so if they are ridiculed, betrayed, or suffer other negative actions, the readers will show their displeasure like the monkeys they are. 2. You also have a point that the author was not sincere about the NTR part, or maybe he didn’t consider it as such. Still, I didn’t understand the “cm” part. 3. What?
Bob_Uchiha_XD:On the topic of the girlfriend's infidelity, there are three factors that harm the fanfic: 1.- Readers of fanfics and web novels imagine that they are the protagonists. So if the author makes the protagonist ridiculed, tortured, betrayed and other negative actions, readers will be dissatisfied if there is no very good reason and GAIN; but above all they will never tolerate harm being done to them (the protagonist) having the information to avoid it. 2.- The author was not emphatic, sincere and timely when telling the public that there is infidelity, that the protagonist's girlfriend will cheat on him with another man who has 15 cm of manhood, that is, 13 cm more than the protagonist. 3.- Fanfic readers are not mature enough to understand that all women without exception are promiscuous.image
15 centimeters (international metric system) (I always use this system because it is international). 15 cm = 5.9" (inches) 3 cm = 1.9" 3.- ... Women are also active sexual beings. Many people who read fanfic, web novels, manga and anime believe that only the protagonist can be promiscuous and therefore sleep with all the attractive female characters, but if the female characters are not virgins there is criticism... 😅
SalveYing:1. I think you're right. Readers tend to see themselves reflected in the protagonists, so if they are ridiculed, betrayed, or suffer other negative actions, the readers will show their displeasure like the monkeys they are. 2. You also have a point that the author was not sincere about the NTR part, or maybe he didn’t consider it as such. Still, I didn’t understand the “cm” part. 3. What?