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ty man. Btw I got contracted, which is why this novel will soon be reuploaded. If you'd like to be updated as soon as that happens, then you could join my discord server. There are around 90 other reader with whom you can discuss and die other stuff. There is also some artwork and even a manhwa with 2 Ch's, which I've drawn all by myself :) If you'd like to join this community here's the link: https://discord.gg/JHxKTPdMeQ
tftca!
Thank you my goodmen
nice start. tftca!
tftca!
Ty bro. Btw I'm currently rewriting this novel, so if you want to stay up to date, then join my discord server: https://discord.gg/SDn3JsADqN
tooooooooooo short.... need more:/
The writing was better this time. However, there are still some parts which could've been written with less telling. But an interesting intrudoction for the beginning.
If you want to write better then try to show and not tell too much. The story seems interesting but you really use too much telling which makes it a bit boring to read. I hope you get what I mean
It's on hiatus. I'm currently rewriting it on my discord. I won't ublish it here 'cause I want to self publish it as a physical books. If you want to read it then join my discord: https://discord.gg/qyDPjyuX