NASIR_OP

first of all i appreciate you very much for writing this Fanfic i am not undermining your efforts at all its just my review for this Fanfic Story first can you tell me if you Reincarnate a soul from modern world and make it Orochimaru but instead of Changing the Character called orochimaru you Mimic exact same behaviour or mindset of orochimaru then what's the point of Reincarnation second if you made Tsunade The love partner of Mc the have him at least only Tsunade but you just went and Fucked up all the timeline by making Kushina and Mikoto his lovers's Third why did you even have to make Story so depressing like it would have been very good or better if you just wrote a simple script like mc Reincarnated in orochimaru got a system and without the human experiment he Got Top notch in everything after that it should be the same him defecting from village until the War arc in war arc you would have shown some good things like orochimaru fight with other Kages but the power level of them should have been higher also after Hiruzan asks him to help Konoha it would be Alright to help like whats even the point of changing story so much he should have asked for some material gains also because you messed up the timeline now all the Fun seeing Orochimaru fight Madara and other great Characters is gone well it just that

Bro i really appreciate you writing this Fanfic but please don't spout nonsense like the Wager he is setting with Faguka what do you mean teach me all the Clan Jutsu is it that simple to get Hands on the Founding Clan Jutsu also why the Fuck were 3 Great Clan leaders present in simple Graduation exam even if Hokage wanted to test him it would be only between Hokage and The instructor now Whats with the Graduation exam its supposed to be the display of Three basic Jutsu of academy and a simple sparring match what did u do yes write a Fanfic but Don't ruin it by adding Unimportant details also make sure to study the history and other things also go to the Gpt and Search for all details about how Jutsu work and how Chakra Control work or how copying Jutsu Work make sure you have essential knowledge of what u are writing

i thought this fanfic was like Naruto the wind Calamity but it proved wrong first the total development of story is Shit no just tell me is it really good to give mc op eye power then make him for no reason go and fu...k everyone also what with that mc gaining Truth seeking orbs Also do tell me how the fuck a clone reached kage level strength nor its impossibly difficult to make a clone and if you make a clone then it is impossible for it to be this strong if that is done it must mean its the work of god also the power system is messed up in this fic

bro wtf its a Saliva not a cheese 😅😅😅😅

i will be honest i really appreciate people writing fanfic but please don't ruin it like if you think that you will not be able to write a fanfic in correct manner don't write now what did you write in this fanfic a small girl telling a small boy that "its like you are carrying a wisdom of lifetime" really bro what kid can say these things at such age and now the sentence "The reality of situation weigh heavily on him" how many did you use this sentence first in chapters where he was talking to mr.end and beginning and after he reincarnated its cring bro

i commented on this Fanfic that if an author can't give mc a time skip then he isn't good authors but you gave mc time skip although it was late But the recent chapters have been disappointment really how long do you even intend to drag Hidden village of the sand really i think its been more then 200 chapters Also it was going well until you decided to make suna more miserable really what do they even have in original Naruto the most Konoha has good relationship was Suna but decided to make mc their full enemy Also i can understand mc progress in Wind and Fire you made mc an expert in Lighting out of nowhere Also if mc was creating an secret organisation it would have been better to make a proper spy network just like Anbu or Root in which mc would have a seal which make all the members mc slave and also they can't betray mc but your choice was off the chart also why did you not give mc the title of the Best fuinjutsu grandmaster title if mc was going to say in one chapter that he is relatively new Grandmaster and after some chapter when he attacks Raikage village and applied his seals no one can recognise them or break them really and whats with him going against every Other Akatsuki member and taking three of them while he is alone....... .... their are some good points like it was a good read if i simply turn off my brain after chapter 500 it also has a one of the best humour Also if we talk about mc being shameless then its on whole other level if i am taking these points it could be around 8.5/10 and If you want to know about my actual opinion then it would be around 7/10

thats the Quote of a year for me I DON'T choose the harem path it choose me 😂😂😂😂😂

I have no problem with this fanfic but their are few things that I personally don't like 1:Mc got transmigrated into a Novel world he know Almost all the plot and twists also he has a will of an top tier race But as soon as he find himself in difficult position he says he wana make a deal with this Lady but he doesn't make a deal he forced himself to be tied by unnecessary conflict ok I get it he is new to this all magic and thing but that doesn't mean he has to beg for this 2:Mc goes into training montage and what barley after A week he comes back to the city really man 3; I personally like mc who are naive in some metters like Mc Transmigrated into another world he was excited at first and make a mistake or two but he learns his lesson Like When a person began to grow old he will learn a few things on their journey. I also want mc to be a dedicated to his cause like Mc decided to join in the war So logically he should be more to accept his Hardship and difficulties i want him to not Whine on every little thing And he should have some brains not someone who only know how to make excuses ..... ..... ..... I am extremely sorry Author But That just my own opinion Also Don't worry your writing skills are Very good Also keep it up

i appreciate the author for putting in so much effort and the concept is also exciting but I don't like it reason for this is first the power system is so confusing even more confusing then LOTM and REVEREND INSANITY but also the elements of personal dimension or space is also not fitting well all in all this type of novels i don't like to read ✌️

i will try