I really mesmerized by your story
Speciallyrics the first chapter it's more like do or die game
It really capture my intrest now I'm eating for next chapter
The previous chapters are well plotted but there are a few punctuation errors
It's such a great story. The plot are great and even the the character.
Well I recommend it to who like to read magic novels. I am going to read more chapter of this novel
To be honest I really like the novel as it captures my interest specially the 5th chapter. I hope this novel get popular soonand from now on I'm also your book' 's fan[img=update][img=update][img=update]
I really got mesmerized by the story when I started to read more. The plots and character are great and specially the writing skills. I hope this story becomes famous
It's a great story and it's plots are great but the names of characters' name are really funny. As I read the story it turns more and more intresting I'm waiting for the next chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's the realistic story I have ever read and also have the funny names like "Wax" I can't hold my laugh by reading this name. Anyway the plot are care fully placed which makes it more intresting. I hope it get updated soon