Mortimer_Darkbane

what a trash MC

The worst part is the love interest of MC is TSunade. a 16 year old with a 50 year old woman.I don't understand how the perverted brain of this Chinese authors work.Tsunade's personality is also different,in the og she is a loyal woman who stays loyal to her lover even after his death,she never even married an other man.But in this she is just a Ped**hile,and ho6ny B17ch

As usual the MC is not a villian.The MC is more like a revenge driven antihero,who only kill people who stand against him.But the most disappointed thing about this MC is his naivity, he was tortured by caged bird when he was a kid by other kids.So when he finally kill Hyuga clan he didn't wipe them all out,he left many kids from main family and pregnant woman alive,making a hidden danger for himself.This is when this foolish guy still doesn't get rid of the caged bird,so if one of those kids the mc spared used the spell to activate caged bird mc will be over. Also the story is just borig

The MC is a Typical naive guy. The mc is sooooo fucking stupid. i thought the mc would become ruthless or smart at least but he is neither is just so stupid. The story is about an idiot that get saved over and over again by the system. The author tried to show character growth but MC never grows. He is soft with woman. There was a woman who was enchanting the whole kingdom to rule them, because she had a nice sob story MC didnt make her his enemy, Stupid book, stupid MC, stupid author.He never conquers anything, he schemes to make the citizens, accept him. those schemes are something a 2 years old child can think of.

Filler chapter, just skip it

MC is just another naive guy , the villian tag is completely misleading. This author also had the audacity to compare this trash novel with WOMW. Leylon's piss have more villianous aura than this MC

Ntr is trash, MC is a simp, worst story. Absolutely waste of time. Lolololololololol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol

The battles are just dragged out and straight up boring, The MC clearly have the power to solo One piece but still struggles miserably because of lame writing. The MC before getting system was able to go against white beared and Roger, but after getting the system and becoming tremendously more powerful, he still struggles against an old white beard and Garp. Also MC doesn't know how to take revenge, he just kills a bunch of old guys who only have a few years left to live in the name of revenge. The revenge was truly unsatisfactory.

I won't be quitting, It's just that I have a lot of work. But I will provide atleast one chapter per day.

Thanks for pointing it out, I will edit it. Please point out any other mistakes or unreadable stuff in this novel when you read more chapters.