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Kevin_Harper_1476

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2023-04-04 JointGlobal
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    Répondu à NarukamiKenji

    I hope you do.

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    Répondu à Kitty_Loves_Milk

    This doesn’t anwser anything. You’ve got fingers. Use them and fix mistakes like this one. Its honestly one of the most obnoxious behaviours, when viewers point out things to be improved and are ignored.

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    Author? Are you dumb? Why don’t you ever fix mistskes?

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    Can’t wait to see him join Artel

    Outside, Grindelwald gazed at the stars, a faint smile playing on his lips. "Big change! The big change I've been waiting for is coming soon!"
    Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby
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  • Kevin_Harper_1476
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    Répondu à Justin_Won

    Why are you still updating this garbage

    Necromancer:I Am the Cataclysm
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  • Kevin_Harper_1476
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    Love how he listens to his allies

    Ch 47 Chapter 47 - A Merit Earned
    The Dreamer's Fall
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    What does Sans mean here?

    Once inside the castle, Arthur and the other lords were escorted to a large hall stripped bare sans the long conference table and chairs occupying it.
    The Dreamer's Fall
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    Why Burnt pork? Shouldn’t it be flesh?

    After a few minutes of marching, Jeren's warning rang true as the smell of rot and burnt pork seeped through the thin handkerchief into Arthur's nostrils. It was a sickening scent, only made worse by knowing of its macabre source. Thankfully, he didn't have to endure the stench for long as the sight of Rothwel's inner castle walls filled his vision.
    The Dreamer's Fall
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  • Kevin_Harper_1476
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    Great chapter. Eye opening for Arthur no doubt.

    Ch 35 Chapter 35 - Foster The Merchant
    The Dreamer's Fall
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    In the ancient times the chinease emperors were worshipped, as they could map the moon and predict an eclipse. Knowing where one comes from doesn’t nessesarily exclude you from worship. Maybe it’s harder, but not impossible.

    However, if a stranger appeared with incredible powers and proclaimed themselves a god, it suddenly became a little easier for most to accept.
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    Gods are wise while also having some shining accomplishment. I’m a christain. My god made a race of people who have complete free will to do as they please. He crated the world and the whole universe from the dark matter in space to the dirt I step on. You don’t worship the devil despite him being old and powerful and potentially wise even. God is good and the devil is not. In this world you’d be a fool not to worship a god, unless that god wasn’t right or just. Humans are corrupt, none are without sin. Look at Arthur, he had a stable boy condemned for insulting him. That’s not godly, that’s arrogance. No passage of time can get rid of the arrogance of man.

    "So is it the faith people have in a god that makes them a god? Or is there something more? What conditions would a human have to fulfill before they shed their title as a human and become a god? How many empires would they need to see rise and fall before you believed in their words unconditionally?"
    The Dreamer's Fall
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  • Kevin_Harper_1476
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    Répondu à Justin_Won

    I’m not from China so I won’t have to worry about that chink

    Necromancer:I Am the Cataclysm
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  • Kevin_Harper_1476
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    Awesome sequence. Truly a cut throat world

    Arthur pushed Ivan's body aside and caught his breath, but everything suddenly went quiet as he glanced at Ivan's corpse. Beat by beat his heart thumped until his racing pulse drowned out the world around him.
    The Dreamer's Fall
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    Wise words from a man who’s never faced a life or death fight

    "Only fools whine about fairness in a fight to the death." Arthur shot back as he analyzed himself in the vanity mirror.
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  • Kevin_Harper_1476
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    Répondu à T_Gold

    I like it. It shows how flawed the character is. In the end it’s a cruel world with people cunning just like him. People who’ve fought more, and seen greater death. We don’t know how just like Arthur doesn’t know how

    Baron Iken shook his head. "Don't let the boy's innocence fool you. He's far sharper than he lets on."
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  • Kevin_Harper_1476
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    Ttfc

    Ch 11 Chapter 11 - Abyssals
    The Dreamer's Fall
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  • Kevin_Harper_1476
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    Répondu à Kevin_Harper_1476

    Nevermind I read that wrong my bad 😂

    "How much crystal does the Revan family provide?" Arthur asked.
    The Dreamer's Fall
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  • Kevin_Harper_1476
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    Change to “how many” as how much is odd

    "How much crystal does the Revan family provide?" Arthur asked.
    The Dreamer's Fall
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  • Kevin_Harper_1476
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    Awesome! Honestly, a part of me hopes he repays what his father has done for him. Emotions aside, he’s done him a great favour.

    Ch 7 Chapter 7 - Edward Revan
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    Understandable to feel that way as much as it is understandable for him to be numb. Lots of people lie to make themselves feel better but ultimately it’s hard to care about suffering you can’t see. People will go on; unchanging, until whatever it is that is wrong is dangling in their faces.

    He wasn't sure if it was because he already had a mother on Earth or because he just never got a chance to know her, but his lack of emotion regarding her murder made him feel dirty.
    The Dreamer's Fall
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