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Not to free men of their suffering, but to give them the light of hope that something better awaits them after the end.
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SwordDomainGod16dRépondu à SwordDomainGod1- SwordDomainGod16dPosté
- SwordDomainGod16dRépondu à Justsome_nobody
she can, she does it multiple times and even wins depending on the author/continuity
Kuuga turns back into his Mighty Form and walks to Black Widow. Kuuga checked her and saw she was fine and only slightly bruised. - SwordDomainGod18dRépondu à LongLingTianKeith
Literally just try to find a source for this minsformation anywhere in the manga and you will see you can't cause it was never stated anywhere, neither was it said by the author himself.
Chapter 18 : Arrival of Mist Shinobi - SwordDomainGod117dRépondu à Helia_King
Nope, it didn't. By the time I reached the last chapter, chapter 18 at the time, there was no Harem tag. And since I was certain it was harem by then, I quit.
'What do you mean? Aren't you already luring your two friends already? Gwen and Mary Jane are a great catch. If you manage to lure them in. you should be proud of yourself.' - SwordDomainGod128dRépondu à Bowsmen
I was thinking about that time when Dolores Umbridge and the ministry started monitoring the network and prevented students from using it. My bad.
"Oh, come on, Hermione, stop lecturing us. You sound like my mother. The platform was blocked for some reason, and there was no other way. We had to drive to Hogwarts," Ron scratched his head in frustration, pleading. - SwordDomainGod11mthRépondu à RazedFire
Yeah, pretty much
He was quite surprised when he read that Wingardium Leviosa was actually a spell just called Leviosa and it only had Wingardium as a prefix to focus the magic of the user on only the feather since the youngsters that were mostly taught the spell as an introduction to Charms had incredibly volatile magic. That way, if their dangerous and sometimes explosive magic was focused entirely on the feather, no bystanders would be hurt. - SwordDomainGod11mthRépondu à MahenzzCh 1 One: Sakura's golden finger
- SwordDomainGod11mthPosté
Raw: American comics start with level five mutants it's a good but wasted premise, after he unlocks most of the third template he is pretty much Invencible and the story is just him getting stronger and fighting, like a lower quality dragon ball. Not worth reading unless you're really looking for something to waste time.
- SwordDomainGod11mthPosté
First issue with this fic is that it's clearly a Harem novel and yet there's no tag warning of this shit. Second issue is the girls losing 40 points of intelligence just by being near him. Third issue is the fact that the protagonist can literally create people to do shit for him. You may like it but it's not my thing. Besides those points it's quite good. The author kept the enthusiastic shouting of the transformation, the gadgets, and all that Japanese flavor of Kamen Rider. If not for everything else, it would be a solid 4.5 out 5. But my final evaluation is 3.4
- SwordDomainGod11mthCommenté
If this is a harem fic, please add this to the tag. When we decide to read something it's the tags that set up the expectations. Don't be surprised if many people start complaining about it later, cause without a warning, they will come expecting something entirely different. I myself will be quite disappointed as well. As I didn't read this expecting it to be a harem
'What do you mean? Aren't you already luring your two friends already? Gwen and Mary Jane are a great catch. If you manage to lure them in. you should be proud of yourself.' - SwordDomainGod11mthRépondu à WomboReader
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'And if it is to lessen his burden and responsibility he carries. I will help him.' Gwen thought and she began blushing a little. - SwordDomainGod11mthRépondu à Axus45_Bre
Sure, if you think suddenly falling in love with someone you don't know is alright.
'And if it is to lessen his burden and responsibility he carries. I will help him.' Gwen thought and she began blushing a little. - SwordDomainGod11mthRépondu à gamabunda4873
AI has an easily recognizable pattern and this definitely isn't AI
"As for how you died, you died trying to stop a suicide bomber from harming the place you worked at." Ah I don't remember much but I'm sure I did it on a whim. Maybe I was suicidal at that time? There's no better way to go than that. - SwordDomainGod11mthCommenté
I'm pretty sure this is only the second time she actively brought the topic onto the table.
"Your story is interesting Gwen. But you talk about Kamen Rider a lot. Do you have a crush on him perhaps?" Peter smirks teasing Gwen. When Gwen told her story she exaggerated a lot when she told Brave's feats. And Peter picked up on this. - SwordDomainGod11mthCommenté
Yeah, extremely forced
'And if it is to lessen his burden and responsibility he carries. I will help him.' Gwen thought and she began blushing a little. - SwordDomainGod11mthCommenté
I can definitely tell that there's AI working here
Gwen listened to Ace and sensed his unwavering conviction. She was filled with awe, marveling at the amazing qualities of the man before her. Despite possessing great power, he displayed no inclination to misuse it, instead dedicating himself to the service of others. Her respect for him grew even more. - SwordDomainGod11mthCommenté
To be honest, I don't think you needed that kind of thing, not to mention, AI doesn't know how to write. So even before reading, I humbly request that you don't use it anymore.
Used AI to improve some text tell me if it improves the work - SwordDomainGod11mthRépondu à blackRh
per week
She wore a black forehead protector of the leaf village on her forehead, a deep red jacket above a black shirt and gray shorts.