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I hate lighting abilities, they are too over used
The fight from first person perspective feels weird and awkward, you should write fights from 3rd person or narrator perspective. Otherwise it's all good, nice chapter and cool ability, though <nightmare> doesn't really seem like a nightmare more like a cheat
Wake up sunless, your nightmare is over 😂😂😂😂😂
Like when nami hits luffy, he somehow stop being rubber😂😂😂😂😂
Duuuuuuude whyyyyy? Author what's up, why is this. This is him getting a slave just using different words because no complete stranger would sleep hugging each other. So this shouldn't happen
He could have just refused to help her if he doesn't a slave. He will gain absolutely nothing from helping her. And he would be standing for his morale...and stuff.
Nice joke, mages and politician are similar in that they can change the world with world😂😂😂😂😂👌
The world couldron remind of harry potter, the potion class. Ahh Good times
I keep hearing this a lot what do you mean by"forced" ?. What exactly is forced about it ?