See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I barely give reviews but It seems I have to give a review for this story. I've read your story and think it is a great story. But I have to ask. What are the negative effects of the MC instant rebirth? Does he just die and get up as if nothing has happened. Does he lose his morality to a greater power? Anyways, I wanted to say I like this story. Please Author, continue to write this story. Oh, right! Let's chat on discord.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

I don't have much experience writing reviews but I will try my best. The world building is good and the writing quality is also good. Although there are a few writing errors here and there but they can be ignored. I like how intense the first chapter was. All the emotions were properly expressed. The only problem I have with this novel is that the sentences are unnecessarily long. No reader likes to read through a very long paragraph. it makes them lose interest very quickly. Some people are very lazy, you know. Anyways, apart from that, this is a pretty good novel. Continue to write, and improve your skills as a writer. May the story bless you.

What an intense chapter, that was.

Been busy but now I'm back.

What a dangerous thing to say, dear reader. I'm sorry but I have to refuse. I already have someone I'm seeing.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Your story? Ha! This is a story I personally created. Where the h*** did you crawl from?

Tck! What do you want now, Suicidal King?

Welcome dear readers, this is the author of this story. I'm writing this novel on my second account due to special reasons. If you have any questions, you can ask in the comment section. In the meantime, I will leave this shameless review here.

The Towers that appeared all over Earth are gateways to the main Tower.

I was a little confused at first but after reading it carefully, it became easier to understand. Just read a few chapters and I must say the world is well balanced as well as the power system. I want to advise the author not to join two many words together. Readers don't like reading long sentences and make sure to use commas at the right places. That'll be all for now. Overall, It's a great story. I advise the readers to give it a try.

Thank you for the review. I will make sure to post future chapters.

Well, this is the first time I'm writing a review but I will say my honest opinion. I like the story so far. I like there was a slow pace before the main action. it gives the story a more realistic flow. The characters are also likeable and they have their own personalities as well, making them feel like real characters. I will just leave this five star review and come back when there are more chapters