EpicStar

Writing quality: Pretty good grammar, it's readable, that alone is an achievement. Although some descriptions are too abstract. Stability of Updates: That looking good. Story Development: The premise it's pretty original and thrilling, it's had little time to develop, so I'm excited to see what cooks out of it. Character Design: The MC feels like a compelling character with lots of room to develop, and the side characters do not feel like NPCs, so good on that. World Background: Decent lore so far. Keep it up.

Stronk?

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Good pace.