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Is it his emotions or the original Lucian's emotions?
I like that he was still in his room, no truck-chan, no flashing lights, nothing, just like that.
The first supporter for me is me hehe but seriously as shameful as it is I will say my honest opinion about this, ofc I will try to base my review only on what I already wrote. -Writing quality: 4/5 Even though I read a lot of novels, and I'm quite harsh when it comes to writing quality, I gave myself 4/5 cause I really try to publish the best quality and keep in mind that this is the first webnovel I ever tried to write seriously. -Stability of updates: 4/5 cause I try my best :), I can squeeze out a chapter every two days, I don't know if I will be able to write faster, but I hope so, -Story development: 5/5 I gave it 5 cause come on, if I think it deserves less then that means I didn't put much thought into the plot, and I lowkey like the way things are going cause I don't try to force anything I just like to follow the flow and see where it leads, it's harder than it sounds, but I can at least promise great plot twists, what I can't promise tho is romance and humor, romance because I don't see that fit in the story, and humor cause I don't think I have that in me to be able a make a funny scene, doing a clumsy attempt will just make cringy. -Character design: 4/5 I don't think there are issues with characters, if there is something it would be that I need to add in some backstory, I do have a backstory of all the characters I introduce to the story, it's just tricky where and when to add it in. -World background: 5/5 if I'm good with something, it's world-building, I have already made the map, all the continents, empires, kingdoms, and many cities, cultures, how Nexa works, what paths are there and much more stuff, all of that is recorded and sealed until its due time XD. if you do have any questions about the story or anything you could ask me, don't be shy. enjoy reading!