I am writing this review because of the previously translated version of "The Legendary Actor." This story managed to surpass the limitations of an amateur story, and I fell in love with it. I hope you can fully translate the Chinese version, as it is unfortunately unreadable. Thank you to the translator for the hard work. I can only imagine how difficult it must be to translate Chinese jokes without fully understanding the context.

As I understand it, this is a crossover between Friren and The Seven Deadly Sins. +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

I liked the story. The magic system hooked me. And the many variations of schools of magic seem intriguing. I see great potential. I also wish you the best of luck on your journey as an author.

Previously, when you wrote the voice of the sage, it was in parentheses. Give it back. This greatly simplifies the concept of who is speaking. Considering that the sage is a frequent guest in your home, the author.

A newborn baby cannot have a scary expression.

This novel needs an editor. The author, tense up and read your novel. Then you will understand. And start new paragraphs more often. It is not clear where the day ends and where it begins.

The guy is 19 years old and still goes to school. It seems someone for an extra year. Or the author hints that the main character is stupid

Judging by their last names, both children are adopted.

It feels like the author cut out a piece of text at the beginning of the chapter.

Sword Qi? What a shame.

Lin Fan? Are there other names?

And that the mangeka's abilities have already sold everything. Or the author is too lazy to come up with something unique for his character.

The cover is off-putting. Change it if possible.

The author understands that he is greedy. But he's okay. Here he is trying to get away. Trying to come up with a stupid excuse to change their own rules.

30??? Hmm, maybe 10,000 right away. Well, so as not to save on potential.

Wow, that's at least more than 5 kilometers.

If you're doing fanfiction. At least respect the original source.

According to this logic, everything should be like this. The protagonist met an unexpected enemy. Time to stop. The villain dies unexpectedly. The protagonist, slightly tired from the use of powers, goes into the shadows. So that no one sees his moments of weakness. End.

Kakuzu?

What stupidity. We don't even know the cause of Uzumaki's death. In case anyone forgot, the Uzumaki were recognized as the most enduring lineage. But here the author without a twinge of conscience, and out of stupidity, simply breaks the canon.