There was a lot of talking here by the ROB
You could have made him explain it more simply and made him talk less
That way he would appear more mysterious which would have made the pov at the end more interesting 🧐
Although I haven't read a chapter yet
I read the summary
And I must say
You could have used it as a plot twist
Change it up a little and keep some details hidden
When you reveal all these details and not keeping the reader somewhat in the dark it can make it boring
Does he not want to destroy the city because it would alert the heroes? But I think he's already strong enough to not care about the consequences
All he needs to get is a domain expansion and he's good to go