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Dexter_SLED

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2022-10-06 JointNigeria
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED6mth
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    The book is actually very good. One problem, slow story development, building up thrilling scenes. So far there has only been struggles here and there for resources. One thing I don't like is the MC drinking zbie blood to survive but well, I know development is coming soon, after all, the book just has 40 chapters.Updating stability: Author still owes us a mass release.Writing quality: Easy to understand, story flows well.character design: You guys seriously need to meet the MC.Story development: Slow but steady, not rushing us, no extreme time skip.world background: So the tiran still has some mystery to it and I hope it gets revealed soon. Characters themselves are mysterious at times..Overall a good read. Now all I can do is hope that author gives us our mass release.

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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED6mth
    Répondu à Pewkmon

    That'll be really sad

    Ch 33 33. Lily & missing people
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
    Répondu à L0st_al0ne

    Sorry, computer corrected me... *So many mistakes.

    Ch 16 The Tigress Devours Her Prey
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    Keep it up.

    Ch 16 The Tigress Devours Her Prey
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    You seriously got to reread your chapters... do many mistakes.Anyways, I had a good laugh.

    Ch 16 The Tigress Devours Her Prey
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    *What

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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    I enjoyed it... very much, what a comeback!Hope you can stick to your words and update daily.I'm just curious about Henry's brother.

    Ch 15 My Gluttonous Tigress
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    Chaii

    " . . ."
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    Name sure you continue it boy...

    Ch 1 Prologue
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    Yes na. why would he want to join birds

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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    You supposed to be like. The scientist had a look of horror as he stared at the screen.

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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
    Répondu à L0st_al0ne

    The first chapter was very good..

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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    Okay okay (Excited!!!)

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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    Some kind of interstellar age

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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    You can delete the chapter... it's useless

    Ch 1 Welcome to create on WEBNOVEL
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
    Répondu à Chidex_Peculiar

    Thank you for the review. Dont worry, I'm improving myself everyday.

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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
    Répondu à L0st_al0ne

    Thanks for the review.

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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
    Répondu à L0st_al0ne

    No.even though his shield held up he was still sent flying to the kingdom.so from there...he called Damien

    Some guards and Grunt ran to the scene. Turns out he called the demon Lord after he was knocked to the palace by the drake.
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
    Répondu à L0st_al0ne

    Do you mind leaving me a review? 🥺🥺

    Hearing what Damien said the guard fell on his butt.
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  • Dexter_SLED
    Dexter_SLED10mth
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    Move it...

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