The story has an inviting synopsis, and the first two chapters were captivating, although there are some places I feel like the writer didn't adequately elucidate for the right perceptibility, I do like the writer's creativity l just feel that the writer should seek out more of that originality.

The story has a good plot which I see the author is striving to express, I know it's the author's first work but I see potential in it.

A nice story with an engaging plot the author did a fine job in the novel's layout.

A Good story with a good concept, the novel is okay, but I believe there's still room for the story to evolve and I would like the author to do that, nonetheless, It's a nice novel.