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Ascended_Mortal

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Up in the Heavens I reside!

2022-09-10 JointGlobal
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal1d
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    *The Jade Emperor*: "What was that?"

    As they all went about their normal daily routine in the office, Fang Chen kept staring at the lieutenant. "I swear on the Emperor's two jades, you're even more beautiful from behind!"
    Immortal Pervert's Return
    Oriental · Lustful_demon
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal3d
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    Innocent Jade Emperor😭

    The explosion sent her flying away with some parts of the top part of her robe now missing. "Curse the jade emperor!" Fang Chen noticed the tears on her robe that revealed her bosom and gave chase.
    Immortal Pervert's Return
    Oriental · Lustful_demon
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal3d
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    Would or wouldn't??

    Fang Chen would stop talking though. "But…"
    Immortal Pervert's Return
    Oriental · Lustful_demon
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal3d
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    Brain number 2 🌚

    "You know, we could both settle this with a one-night stand," he hurriedly called out upon feeling the blood rushing to a certain part of his body.
    Immortal Pervert's Return
    Oriental · Lustful_demon
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal3d
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    Okayyyyyy😂

    "Rather than head back to wherever you called that place, how about you and I get to know each other more? Just you and me. In a room. With no clothes." Fang Chen spoke with a blank yet expression.
    Immortal Pervert's Return
    Oriental · Lustful_demon
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal3d
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 1...Mate heartbreak...
    Alpha's Mate And Desire
    Fantaisie · Queenjsteph
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal3d
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 1...Mate heartbreak...
    Alpha's Mate And Desire
    Fantaisie · Queenjsteph
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal3d
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 1...Mate heartbreak...
    Alpha's Mate And Desire
    Fantaisie · Queenjsteph
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal5d
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    The overall premise is good but the author needs to work on the dialogues as well as transition scenes. The book is a good read if one is willing to look past the errors. (Dialogue and progression wise).

    Purchased As The Young Master's Pet
    Histoire · Nira_Onami
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal5d
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    The story progression is looking promising. The character introduction is also good and although I haven't seen much of the world building, the description is quite nice. It's a nice read.

    Moonlit Reckoning: A Tale of Love and Rejection
    Fantaisie · QuinnGee
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal7d
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    You could definitely work better on the grammar but I do like the progression. The beginning also didn't feel rushed or forced. It's a good pick.

    My Brothel System: I Raise My Courtesans To Become Immortals
    Oriental · YannNovel88
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal7d
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 A girl and a woman
    the business tycoon vs the Mafia boss: I'm in between!
    Urbain · Mr_Passek
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal12d
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 A girl and a woman
    the business tycoon vs the Mafia boss: I'm in between!
    Urbain · Mr_Passek
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal8mth
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    Overall, the book is a great one coming from a new author. It's awesome and although the pacing is slow, I can assure you that it is worth it. It's one of those development books with a great potential.

    Advent Of The Last Dragon
    Fantaisie · UrekSenpa1
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  • Ascended_Mortal
    Ascended_Mortal1yr
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    If it makes his teammates stronger too, then it's a W!!! +1

    Collector: A special class that affects all his teammates. He supernaturally (lol) manages to share his Stamina with his teammates, making them able to fight for a longer time. After the gifting of stamina is over, if his Stamina depletes, he bears all the group stress himself.
    Highschool Of The Dead: Shiro's Cheat
    Anime et bandes dessinées · UrekSenpa1
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