I don’t know what these other guys are smoking, but this fic is my favorite rn. Not of all time, but it’s story is so much fun and entertaining, and we haven’t even gotten sus yet
I’m sorry man, I was the biggest fan of your first two fics, which I think are some of the best on this site, even the cafe one, which I didn’t personally like very much, was really good. But this one is kind of just fun brainrot. Not bad, but it kind of just feels like a Chinese ffn mtl
My criticism is that, there is no build up to this relationship, maybe a chapter or two would have been better before making her like him at all, and a Yandere already is too much
"Mimic seems to be working with the Black Ops equivalent of the Marines while Justice and Goddess of Ice are being trained by the Vice Admirals that have the same Devil Fruit power they do, giving them a serious boost in the skill department. White Knight hasn't revealed his skills to the Marines yet, so he is training in secret. We don't know how strong he is."
Looking between Jiro and Momo she just shakes her head, 'maybe his Quirk is pheromones or something, he can't be that bad if he's got both of them acting like this...'