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Homeless_Traveler

Homeless_Traveler

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Dear readers, Hello! I'm Homeless Traveler, a newcomer in creative writing!

2022-08-01 JointGlobal
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  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté

    But the teacher said to exclude rune, incantation and magic circle?

    The first would be the incantations that summon spell circles.
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantaisie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté

    Bro, did you just experience a flood? Hope you're save

    Ch 10 Exposed
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantaisie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté

    This dialogue is a bit confusing...

    Ce paragraphe a été supprimé.
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantaisie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté

    They who?

    "If I find it interesting enough, I might help you hide from the academy. They have already started the investigation to look for a dark creature" he smirked
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantaisie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté

    Do you mean the former? The latter would be Cio

    Ce paragraphe a été supprimé.
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantaisie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Posté

    The author did an excellent job of narrating the story. The writing quality is also great, though some punctuation problems can be seen in some parts. Other than that, there's nothing else to nitpick. Keep going! (fire)

    Ce livre a été supprimé.
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Répondu à Aira_Rin

    Thank you for your reviews!

    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Sports, voyage et activités · Homeless_Traveler
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Répondu à Rin_Nurnia

    Thank you so much for your reviews!

    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Sports, voyage et activités · Homeless_Traveler
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Posté

    The first conflict was introduced quite slowly, and honestly, I thought this work would be boring. But I was wrong; the story is actually very good! Moreover, the writing was very neat. Looking forward to this story's completion!

    Ce livre a été supprimé.
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Posté

    The sentences are a bit awkward and confusing, but at least it got the story... I'm hoping for this novel's future improvements. Keep writing!

    The Deal With The Deviless
    Fantaisie · BLACK_LIGHT_
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté

    I think you also need to put 'abusive content warning' at the start of this chapter

    Ce livre a été supprimé.
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté

    I wonder why the police didn't take the kids to psychologists...

    Ce livre a été supprimé.
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté

    This might be a wild idea, but I think a predator is scarier than a predictor...

    Ce livre a été supprimé.
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Répondu à Zieve1

    Thank you for your reviews! :D

    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Sports, voyage et activités · Homeless_Traveler
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Posté

    I must say that I haven't read a story like this ever in my life. Moreover, the writing is very neat, so I could enjoy the story smoothly. Looking forward to how the story will turn out!

    钱花光了
    sport · Zieve1
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Répondu à appricotblossom

    you're welcome!

    Ch 45 Coming up with a new Plan
    High Schooler By Day, Royal Tutor by Night
    Fantaisie · appricotblossom
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté

    looking good, i see

    Ch 24 Journey, II
    Absolute Transcendent: Dimension Traverse
    Fantaisie · ItsHashi
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté
    Ch 45 Coming up with a new Plan
    High Schooler By Day, Royal Tutor by Night
    Fantaisie · appricotblossom
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Commenté

    Still some punctuation errors here and there. Hope it gets better next chapter

    Ch 9 Undeserved Revenge
    Ciobara's Reincarnation
    Fantaisie · Eclipse_Ranger
    detail
  • Homeless_Traveler
    Homeless_Traveler1yr
    Répondu à Eclipse_Ranger

    thank you for your reviews, kind reader! :D

    The Absurdity That Is Us
    Sports, voyage et activités · Homeless_Traveler
    detail