In the end I failed to write one before bedtime because some moron forgot to do the laundry(it was me)

you inspired me to write.. so ill be writing another chapter just before sleep.. hopefully i finished it before bedtime haha

thanks

what do you think so far? is there some errors I should fizx?

hahaha yeaahh!! i went back too to cheeck lmaoo

and thanks for the kind words!!

explored what.. please elaborate so i can do some adjustments

anyway .. thanks for talking . I'm motivated to keep writing now that i know someone are genuinely interested in my work!! ill do my best to keep you entertained !! if you have any suggestions dont be shy and tell it.. this story isn't that solid yet.. so i can still change some few stuff... but keep in my tho.. im not going to stray too far from my planned plot

you'll see what the hobogoblins are capable of soon! haha! cuz if my memories serves me right i have not written a hobo goblin encounter right? correct me if im wrong .. im so busy with irl i forget many stuff to the point that I actually needed to read back the previous chapters while writing the latest ones hahah

but to answer your question . yes . indeed its waay too little . but thats the point .. its there to keep the players from killing everything , because if there wont be anyone in their right mind to commit mass masace and keep in mind ... many of people here knows how to fight so, people who does it for just a mere 3xp are morons, unless they enjoy it...

oh yeah.. i haven't said it in the story but there's actually classes for everything common= 3xp elite = 5 mini boss = 10 boss = 20 special = varies and human belongs to the common group.. because this class is based on their race .. its the way of the "game" to make sure no "player" could farm easily and get stronger quickly in the early games.. so the player will be force to climb the tower a bit of a spoiler oh i forgot to mention . you can only kill the same species 15 times... except for humans tho..

Just a bit of them, but yes

Damn I need this kind of review for my story. wonderfully done

Also... Mr. Fury.. I thank you... you're one of the reason I keep my drive hahahaha

you are always welcome

please rate my works too 🙏 its called As a monster: Reincarnation im extremely biased on my work so i need outside opinion about it!

Pretty much... fighting this guy without an antidote is a suicide... unless you know his moves really well

you are welcome mr. fury

dang, you sure are consistent in your thanks.. haha you're welcome